HOMELESS

a Poem/ little story about a homeless boy and finding real love

Homeless boy walking....

on a busy street, 

nowhere to go 

and certainly nothing to eat.

No shelter from the rain

no shelter from a storm,

built up inside so much pain

and definetly nowhere to keep warm.

sitting there on the footpath 

in the biggest city,

only for the rich people to walk by

and take pity.

All there money and all those richs

and they cant spare a cent for someone in need,

All those a******s all those bitchs

all that money with hearts so full of greed.

Poor lonley boy walking with hes head low,

Noone to love him and still no place to go.

He looks up for split second

and he cant belive hes eyes,

he had never seen someone more beatiful

this was such a suprise.

Her long dark hair flowing behing her

she walks with such grace,

she leans down

and gently wipes a tear off my face.

A kind loving soul beautiful as can be,

and the light in all this darkness i now begin to see.

Love at first sight

a beautiful love story,

she found me tonight

this beautiful woman named Tori.

She took me in and my life 

She turned around,

Shes now my world

and to her im forever bound.

Homeless boy now walking the street,

I turn to him our eyes meet.

He looks at me with darkness and despair,

I know how he feels the pain he bares.

I sit with him we talk for a bit

but before i walk away,

I tell him to keep hes head held high

and asure him that one day.....

Things wont always be so bad

a kind soul you will find,

I give him 100 dollars as i walk away

but turn to say sweety love is blind.

Reviews

[mark]

this is a great poem babe :) really enjoyed the storyline...i dont know how u come up with things like this ur a great writer u must keep going :) i love everyone on your poems they all have so much meaning and most of its actually true :) writing is in your blood isnt it hehe :) keep writing babe this is a beautiful poem sweetheart :) i love you xxxx see your pretty face soon :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

awww thanks hun im glad u liked it yer was trying to think of something different that people usually would write about.
awwwww that means so much to me hun means even more when u say it.
hehe i try :P
im really pashionate about it so to know that u think im that good it really means allot babe.
i plan to babe dw i plan to :)
I love u to my sweetheart mwa xxxooo

[mark]

hehe good :) i love you too :) xxxooo

[DOROTHY]

this is so good hun you sure are a gr8 writer and i enjoyed reading this
it reminds me of the poem i put on today called hobo
keep up the gr8 work my friend
hugs
ya friend dot

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

thanks dot. im glad u enjoyed it :)

[DOROTHY]

y v w hun :)

[WillaDanvers]

This has a great story line, really well written also - apart from a few spelling errors here and there, you have done an amazing job!

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Thank you. Yes my grammar needs tonz of work haha.

[SpeedyHobbit Armstrong]

Great poem and great story. You really and truly captured the feelings one in such a dire situation would have. Loved the denouement

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

thanks so much for your review :)

[TheLoneWriter]

I really enjoyed you piece! I thought it had a very sweet message! I love how the story turned back around with seeing another homeless boy and telling him everything will be ok, overall, great writing!!!

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Thanks for the review :)
so glad you like my story :)

[Teeya]

A food for thought piece leaving the reader full of smiles, not for the being homeless part, but for finding and encouraging hope at the end of a dark day. I thank you for sharing such a moving and heartwarming piece.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

thanks for your lovely kind review.
Im glad you enjoyed it :)

[MikeV]

Sad yet heartwarming! Great write :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Thanks Mike :)

[Jason]

This poem is just wonderful c:

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

thank you im glad you liked it :)

[The Invisible Girl]

What a sweet storyline! I enjoyed reading this! Keep it up! :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

thanks so much im glad u enjoyed it

[LaVonneTheLovely]

What a sweet storyline, and such an uplifting ending!

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

thanks im glad u liked it :)

[LaVonneTheLovely]

You are most welcome!

[annabellee]

Great story. I really enjoyed it. You describe the live of the poor boy very well and I really enjoyed the love-storyline to it.
But I'm acutally a bit confused by the change of perspective. First it is "he", and then suddenly "I". Was this intended and I just don't get it? ;)
But anyways well penned :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

yer just the way i ended up writing it i think u have a good point i even thought about changing it just think it sounds weird but good that way idk why haha.
im glad u loved it though thanks for another review

[annabellee]

you're most welcome :)