OUR ROLLER COASTER!

The ups the downs 

the highs and lows

Just like a roller coaster

that's how our relationship goes.

Your anger, your rage, 

our passion, my tears.

These are the things

that give us fears.

A fear of breaking up, 

of not pulling though.

which scares us beyond

what we ever could have knew.

For through every fight,

and all those tears.

Comes happness

though memories and years.

We hold each other up,

when we are down.

without any question

without any sound.

To our love we always stand our ground

For to each other we are forever bound.

For no relationship is perfect dear,

For with happiness and laughter

Follows a tear.

Our roller coaster relationship,

Is far from easy this is true,

Although all this time 

we made it through

I wouldn't change anything about us in the end,

For your the best lover, boyfriend,soul mate and friend.

I love you so much Mark,

and just so you know.

I'm far from willing

to let you go.

Reviews

[annabellee]

aaaaawwwwww that is just such a cute poem, well done :)

"I wouldn't change anything about us in the end,
For your the best lover, boyfriend,soul mate and friend."
that was my favourite part about your poem.
You could really tell through your poem how much you care about him.
Well penned :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

im glad u liked it Anna :) its ok i if i call you Anna yer?
I truely do hes amazing in many ways im so lucky to have him in my life :)
Thank u for ur review your words always mean allot to me

[annabellee]

yeah sure, that's alright :)
you're most welcome :)

[Me]

so beautiful hun, you described a lot of relationships here :) x

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

yer i like writing things people can relate to :)
Speaking of relationships, hows your boyfriend???

[Riding the Rainbow]

This is really a manifestation of your love for your boyfriend..you're very lucky to have him by your side..

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

thanks i know i am :)
thanks for your review :)

[CharM105]

Couldn't agree with you more.... 100%

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

thanks /:)

[SyberRose]

Love is grand especially young love...nicely penned...Rose:)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

thank you im so glad you liked it. Your review means allot...Cimmy :)

[mark]

hehe i love this poem babes :) thank you for writing me this :)
we have been through allot and we still manage to pull through it. that's how strong our love is babe :)
i like how u related it to a roller coaster that's pretty cool and creative.
i love you and your poems i will always love everything you write me :)
xoxoxoxo -cuddles- :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

i know u do hehe and ur most welcome hun.
I also know that babe :)
yeah im to good i know i know.
awwwww glad to here it i love everything u write me to :)

[mark]

hehe smartass :P
hehe good :) i love putting a smile on your face :)