THE GHOST NEXT DOOR.....

About a girl falling for the guy next door that only she can see little does she know hes only a spirt that hasn't yet moved on

I see him there from day to day,

that handsome guy next door.

I see him there looking my way,

I even see him there in the store.

I see him as he leaves hes house for a walk.

Hes house looks kinda spooky i know,

As i watch hes every move like a hawk.

My face to him i wish i could show.

Today as i wake from my sleep,

and climb my a*s out of bed.

That promise to myself i keep,

and instead of grabbing a bite to eat...

i march over to hes house instead.

i knock on his door waiting my heart beating quick

As i open my mouth no words coming through

At hes door i stand trying to look slick,

As he looks into my eyes charming and true.

Hello my dear he says through his smile,

I have been waiting for you for a long while.

I sit and watch you from A far,

wanting to know just who you are.

Before i can say another word,

he presses hes finger to my lips.

As i tremble at the feel

of hes warm fingertips.

My time has come and gone so very fast,

and i wasn't ready to leave this place just yet.

Although now ill go, leave behind my past,

and ill move on with nothing to regret.

I weep as it hits me hard and raw,

As i relise hes alive no more.

He then leans in and kisses me tender,

and its to him my heart i surrender.

I see him fading away being lifted into a light above,

i know i just meet him but i instantly fall in love.

We will meet in another lifetime i here him whisper to me so,

As i wake from my sleep i sigh as i whisper.....

 but i wasn't ready to let you go.

Reviews

[mark]

this is a great story/poem babe i really enjoyed reading this. its very sweet and romantic. how do u come up with ideas like this? and u think im getting better than you? pfft...as if lol.
you're so great at writing darlz u must keep going. i love reading your stuff and i always will. great poem once again. u have so much talent. great work sweetheart :)
I love you hehe :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Thanks hun im so glad you like it :)
Lol idk allot of thinking :)
Sometimes with certain things you are.
Thanks babe i dont want to ever stop i love to write :)
awww thanks hun you think so/??
I love you more mwa xxxooo

[mark]

good :) and you're welcome xxxxxooooo

[Daniel Valentine Rivera]

A satisfyingly bittersweet poem. Best poem I've come across in a long time. What a way to tell a story about the apprehensiveness of talking to a crush, then watching their life drift away. It's a feeling that was expressed beautifully in this poem. One of my favorites! Nice work Cimmy!

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Thanks that means allot to me. :)

[Ankur Sharma]

very romantic and interesting to read specially the last para was amazing.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

im glad you liked it. Im so glad you think the last line is good i changed it a few times couldnt decide how to end it....
thanks again for your wonderful feedback

[annabellee]

such a great story wrapped in a great poem, I enjoyed it a lot.
Well penned :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

thanks so much Anna :)

[annabellee]

you're most welcome :)

[NA]

Beautiful bittersweet haunting read, really enjoyed hun :) x

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

thanks hun so glad you liked it :)