I CANT LOOSE YOU!

My boyfriend and i have been going though a really hard time. I wrote this poem about him from my heart. Hoping we work out and saying how i feel :)

Lately our lives have been messed around,

Searching for happiness that's hard to be found. 

Arguments get bad and we often disagree,

The good in each other we refuse to see.

Your finding life tough, 

You cant seem to find work.

My life's also been kinda rough,

We sometimes act like jerks.

We tend to say things that often come out wrong,

Although were both always trying never to give in.

We will always pull though because to each other we belong,

If we lost each other......

Thinking about the rest of our lives where would we begin?

We are nothing without each other,

when together where whole.

For if i lost you my dear,

My life would spin out of control.

I cant loose you Mark i promise

we will always pull through,

Because you are the best guy 

I have ever knew.

Ill never give you up just know ill fight to the end,

I'm not going anywhere on me you can depend.

I love you so much these feelings only grow,

Getting a job im working on it in time will show. 

I cant loose you you mean way to much, 

I couldn't go without your embrace your touch.

I love you babe a future without you i just don't see,

So know no matter what wherever you are ill be. :)

Reviews

[Sarmelendez]

You are such a gifted writer esp. when it comes to raw and real emotions. I felt ever word that you wrote here. I know the feeling of what you have here and I can say it gets better. You have to go threw the bs to get to the feeling of love and every thing else.

Very heart felt here keep it up

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Thank you so much one of the best comments i have gotten seriously made me feel good about myself thank you so much (your such a gifted writer) those words mean more then words can say thank you so much that touched me :)
Thank you for your kind words so clad you can relate and you enjoyed it.
lots of love cimmy xxxooo

[Laura Harrison]

Every relationship has its ups and downs, none is ever perfect. But as long as the love is mutual, you can get through it every time. And I can tell that you and your boyfriend are very much in love with each other :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

thanks for the lovely review :)

[Riding the Rainbow]

Beautiful poem..it really touched my heart..

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

thanks im glad you enjoyed it :)

[Lydia Shutter]

Honestly, I think you mean "lose" and not "loose"....for you are saying you can't untie the man you love, you are saying you don't want to be without him. Lots of emotions expressed here. Lydi*

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

thanks for the advice my spelling isn't the best i know.

[SyberRose]

Nicely penned and written from your heart...hope things work out dear...we all can relate to your words.:)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

thanks hun im glad i can write things people relate to.
Thanks so much for ur kind review. read morethanks hun im glad i can write things people relate to.
Thanks so much for ur kind review.
God bless :)

[zainul]

This is a great commitment of you for Mark.
I hope the crisis will be overcome soon.
Thanks for sharing.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

thanks for the review :)
Its getting better now :)

[zainul]

You are most welcome,dear friend.:)

[annabellee]

I hope you'll get things right again. :)
Heartfelt poem with powerful emotions. I could tell how much you indeed care for him.
Well done :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Thanks Anna as always your reviews are much appreciated :)
thank you for you kind words :)

[annabellee]

you're always most welcome :)

[mark]

awwwww babe this is beautiful.
yes you're right our lives have been messed around and our fights too i'm sorry bout everything, i have just been really stressed out lately and i don't mean to take it out on u and everything else around me. i love you too much i shouldn't do that. i am really going better with my temper now and i'm happy that is working for me, nothing is making me upset anymore i don't know why.
i really don't want to lose you either sweetheart i can't see a life without you too, it's just impossible to even think about i want you in my life and always will want it that way. No matter what we go through i never want to lose the best girl in the world. your are amazing in every way i'm sorry i don't say this much. you are the best.
i love this poem babe its a great write and very sweet. thanks :)
i love you with all my heart babe xxxooo

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

thanks hun glad you like it you didnt when i started it lol.
I know hun i understand its ok.
Im so glad you have been trying so hard on that for me, and your really fixing it it means allot to me thank you.
Awww your such a sweetheart, i never want to loose you babe you mean so much to me.
Awwww im sorry i dont say it much either but so are you.
Your welcome hun anytime )
I love writting about you.
I love you to hun xxxooo

[mark]

i know i thought it was gonna turn out different lol.
i have and i'm glad you're happy too.read morei know i thought it was gonna turn out different lol.
i have and i'm glad you're happy too.
likewise sweetheart :)
thank you and it ok :)
i love writing about you too hehe :)
i love u more xxx

[Me]

awww hunni, that is so heartfelt. I'm sure you two will work things through. Life is a challenge but love always prevails xx

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

thanks hun i hope we will like i said i cant loose him.
thanks for your sweet review,
dont seem to be gettin many from anyone these days.

[MikeV]

Very heartfelt! I hope it works out for you two. Keep up the writing!!

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

thanks i hope so to.
Thanks for the review :)