I'M GIVING UP!

I'M GIVING UP!

A Poem by cimmy wuv xxxooo

Many thoughts run through my head tonight,
These many thoughts may be more dark then light.
Thoughts about giving up, as there's only so much i can try, 
Im now at the point when i dont see a reason why?

Im a nice person and a good friend. 
Broken bonds i try to mend. 
Although why do i try so hard, when people dont seem to try in return, 
If our friendships not important to them, then ill watch the fire run and burn.

As for sleeping, i toss and i turn, listen to mum or the boyfriend snore, 
I just want peace and quite, i cant take it anymore. 
So im given up on sleep as well, 
I guess ill have to be tired as hell!

As for happiness that is very rear.
I hardly ever see it, it isnt really there. 
Every now and again it shows up in my life, 
But then it leaves me to the darkness, that cuts me like a knife.

Theirs allot of things in my life that just refuse to work out,
Iv given up fighting, so i wont scream i wont shout. 
Ill surrender for im tired and iv just given in,
Darkness you have surround me, u win.

© 2015 cimmy wuv xxxooo


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It relates with many people's daily life....Sounds very true and created with much care.....Awesome as always.....Full rating.....

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

cimmy wuv xxxooo

8 Years Ago

thank you :)
Thank you. Sometimes we just have to let go. A good reminder.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

cimmy wuv xxxooo

9 Years Ago

No thank you for your review :)
Heart2Soul

9 Years Ago

My pleasure. I have not yet been through much on this site being new to it all but from what I have .. read more
cimmy wuv xxxooo

9 Years Ago

Awww thanks so much. you are sweet :)
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yeah that's my input :) XX


Posted 9 Years Ago


cimmy wuv xxxooo

9 Years Ago

Thanks haha :)
Never give up we always have hope as long as we have breath in our lungs.You connect with me cause I really snore loud if on my back,my wife loses seep because of it nicely phrased

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

cimmy wuv xxxooo

9 Years Ago

My heart goes out to your wife then :P
Thank you for reviewing :)
W R Stowe

9 Years Ago

your quite welcome
Direct and honest thoughts. Sometime we can reach a dead-end. Some folks won't flex or bend. The poem told of struggle and led to learning. Can't repair all things. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


cimmy wuv xxxooo

9 Years Ago

thank you so much for your review :)
Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

You are welcome.

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cimmy wuv xxxooo
cimmy wuv xxxooo

melbourne, Australia



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Hey everyone im cimmonne (prounced simone) but everyone i know and love calls me cimmy. I'm unique and different and 100 percent me. I have a passion for writing and i want to share my writing with ev.. more..

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