YOU!

YOU!

A Poem by cimmy wuv xxxooo
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About a guy i met while going through the two hardest weeks of my life.

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You where there for me, when he was not.
It wasn't his fault, but he left me in a tight spot. 
He needed to get himself well, i was left in pain, 
Boredom and depression where driving me insane. 

a quite emotion charged chat we shared,
to each other our feelings we beared. 
There to support each other in our tough times,
I showed you my poetry and cleaver rhymes.

Sharing our interests, and passions... we discovered,
Allot of common ground was being uncovered. 
We ended up having a lot in common for sure, 
having that emotional connection, shook me to the core.

Its hard feeling like your lover of 5 years, doesn't understand,
an emotional connection between us, just doesn't come first hand. 
But with you it was simple and easy, and conversation flowed,
as we formed a strong bond quite quickly, and our connection growed. 

I was, and still am in a venerable state, 
i have had so much hardships on my plate. 
My emotions were controlling me, i can't deny,
and then these sudden feelings had me questioning why?

I was becoming scared, as im extremely loyal and true, 
But it was difficult, and harder when it came to you.
Every other guy has been strictly a friend,
rules and boundary's, i would never bend.

I let you cross a few lines, i crossed some as well,
Though with my boyfriend, all this i did tell.
His reaction was great, he was hurt but not mad,
I thought that was mature and manly of him, i was glad. 

So maybe it was nothing, maybe theirs nothing there,
honestly think my emotions are just leaving me bear.
Im in a venerable state, i needed comfort, and you are great,
After all this i hope you can still be a good mate. 

© 2017 cimmy wuv xxxooo



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Love this
I'll be back to read more

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Enjoyed the read, I always do. You have to be so careful when you're venerable, but you've expressed that well.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

cimmy wuv xxxooo

6 Months Ago

Yer i know.
Thanks for the review :)
Yeah, a good one...can be good mates..i liked it..well every hard time passes away with beautiful memories..:)

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

cimmy wuv xxxooo

6 Months Ago

Thank you for your kind review :)
Written with such emotion Cimmy, I could feel it. Almost funny how instances like this one bring out the poetry in us all. Thanks for sharing!

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

cimmy wuv xxxooo

6 Months Ago

Yep thats who i am extreamly emotional person, not surprised it comes out in my poetry.
Glad.. read more
I have to do the same confess to something
and i hope my significant other is confident enough to say oh well
it happens

thanks for sharing this

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

cimmy wuv xxxooo

6 Months Ago

Confessing to these things is not easy. But to not tell the truth and keep t to yourself makes you a.. read more

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cimmy wuv xxxooo

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Hey everyone im cimmonne (prounced simone) but everyone i know and love calls me cimmy. I'm unique and different and 100 percent me. I have a passion for writing and i want to share my writing with ev.. more..

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