ANOTHER DAY IN THE WAY!

How im feeling, at the moment.

everyday i wake up, its all the same, 

Nothing in my life will ever change.

I only have myself to blame, 

No motivation, everything out of range. 

Everyday is just like the one before, 

Except sometimes with more pain to endure. 

I'm emotionally tired, i no longer want to feel, 

I'm starting to wonder if the word happiness is real.

Boyfriend trys to kill himself, leaves me in pain, 

Then tells me not to worry for he wont do it again.

He wanted to leave me behind when life got to tough, 

But I don't try to leave him when things get so rough. 

Walking through life like a zombie, I wait, 

For just that one day, the day that will be great.

there's not many of those days, most days are dark,

Life is unfair, and far from a walk in the park. 

So i sit and i wait, and i let the days go on by, 

i Look forward to a certain day, and i hope the time does fly...

When a great day does come, i feel it and i feel alive, 

Its the feeling of happiness, I was excited for it to arrive. 

Every other day, is just another day in the way, 

I don't know sometimes if its worth it, to stay.

To stay and wait for happiness, for those short lived times,

My life fades away slowly, every time the clock chimes. 

Life is short lived, and it goes by so fast, 

with no motivation, everyday is like the last. 

My life goes nowhere, and I think im quite stuck, 

All i know is for me... life sure does suck!

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

If your life suck.
"ife is short lived, and it goes by so fast,
with no motivation, everyday is like the last.
My life goes nowhere, and I think im quite stuck,
All i know is for me... life sure does suck"
Find something else to do. Test life, travel and do some good. Thank you my friend for sharing your amazing words and thoughts.
Coyote

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Thank you for your review

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.

[Rache David]

It's actually so simple; easy to read. Everyone could relate, without even thinking that much. Some poems are just so deep and really difficult to understand. But yours, is just so simply conventional. I like it. But maybe you could have made it a little tangible. That they would imagine how would it feel, if life sucks.. :). Great work, nevertheless.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Thank u so much 4 ur review

[barleygirl]

Normally I don’t like overly dreary messages, but you’ve done a good job crafting this one in an artistic way, so it doesn’t sound like a rant or a whiny dump. Your rhyme & rhythm are well-done & remind me of a mocking tone . . . as if the rhythm is bouncy, but it’s all a sham. Your examples are powerful, such as the boyfriend attempting suicide . . . again, your tone is light, but the subject matter is heavy. Somehow this juxtaposition of tone & content work well together, as if the message is a spoof on life itself. I love the title, too. So perfect for such a bad attitude. In reality, I believe we must each make a decision to make each day as good as we can make it. Nobody is handing out good days anywhere. It’s up to us to make it happen. So I’m not in agreement with your narrator, but I love the flippant way you say it (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Thank you so much for your long thought out review I appreciate it

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

Life does suck lol. Every creature on the planet is struggling. But there is ups to the down and silver-linings, a lot of time you got to look for them, not to mention wait. Enjoyed reading your poem. It's so full of meaning.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

I just really struggle to find the silver linning allot.
Im glad you enjoyed reading my poem :)
Thankz for the review

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I do think we feel stuck in a situation at times but it really isn't the end of the world. Every time something bad happens, it brings good with it too. We just have to keep looking...
You penned the emotions well.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Thanks for the review :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You're welcome 😊

[Anjali]

It contains so much pain and beauty in it. Totally loved this poem. You can feel the pain while reading it. Amazing write!

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Thank you :)

[Joey Nizz]

Wow, strong feelings within these words that I have read, well wrote I can really relate to what you have wrote. Thank you for sharing :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Thank you for reviewing. Glad you liked it :)

[Joey Nizz]

Your welcome ^^