EMOTIONALLY BROKEN!

EMOTIONALLY BROKEN!

A Poem by cimmy wuv xxxooo

Where do I start when explaining how I feel,
I'm broken and don't know how to heal.
One thing I know is my love for you is beyond explanation,
But due to not being happy iv given into temptation.

I don't think you will ever understand,
Its not enough to take my hand.
because you may be there, and I know you care,
but emotionally I'm off somewhere....

My head is in the clouds, I am no longer in control,
Thinking with my emotions, (no brain,) just heart and soul.
From you I'm feeling, depressed, sad and disconnected,
you'll never understand me emotionally, and I'm greatly affected.

My friends and family are amazing, and to them I am bound,
With them just for awhile  happiness can be found.
You try, and you can be amazing, you are a good guy,
but I'm hardly ever happy, and usually on an emotional high.

Then there's this guy that does your job, and for a minute I'm happy,
But I'm scared, and I love you, I'm also feeling guilty, and crappy.
So I don't know if when I'm back with you, and in your embrace,
if we should go on, because I'm tired of running this race.

I'm on an emotional roller coaster, and its you,
do I jump off or stay on? I don't have a clue.
Because I feel like this coaster is just speeding down a broken track,
and I don't know how to get the ups back.














© 2017 cimmy wuv xxxooo



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If in doubt, get out - that's my advice!

I enjoyed reading through this jingly piece, with its self-searching and plea for help in the uncertainties of the relationship in question. He needs to understand your need of emotional stroking. It wont last without it.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

cimmy wuv xxxooo

5 Months Ago

Thank you. :) great advice wish it where that easy to get out


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This sounds the the Avril Lavigne song "What the Hell". Same situation without the guilt.

Posted 1 Month Ago


cimmy wuv xxxooo

1 Month Ago

U think? That's an interesting concept. Thank you for the review
Frankie

1 Month Ago

That song is a farce i realize. Real life is another story.
i feel this on so many levels. going through this girl it sucks and i hate it, this piece is marvelous. thank you for this

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

cimmy wuv xxxooo

4 Months Ago

I'm sorry ur going through something similar. Thanks for the review
Powerful, from beginning to end. Enjoyed your way of explaining things, as always.

“Being deeply loved by someone gives you strength, while loving someone deeply gives you courage.” Lao Tzu.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

cimmy wuv xxxooo

4 Months Ago

Thanks so much :)
Beautifully written. You have expressed your feelings really well and creatively used different metaphors to provide a broader meaning.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

cimmy wuv xxxooo

5 Months Ago

Thank you for the review
Najam Us Saher

5 Months Ago

You're most welcome.
If in doubt, get out - that's my advice!

I enjoyed reading through this jingly piece, with its self-searching and plea for help in the uncertainties of the relationship in question. He needs to understand your need of emotional stroking. It wont last without it.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

cimmy wuv xxxooo

5 Months Ago

Thank you. :) great advice wish it where that easy to get out

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cimmy wuv xxxooo
cimmy wuv xxxooo

melbourne, Australia



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Hey everyone im cimmonne (prounced simone) but everyone i know and love calls me cimmy. I'm unique and different and 100 percent me. I have a passion for writing and i want to share my writing with ev.. more..

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