FALLING FAST!

FALLING FAST!

A Poem by cimmy wuv xxxooo

You have got me right where you want me, im hooked,
These feelings and emotions can't be overlooked. 
This is all happening so fast and im scared as hell, 
but you reasure me that you are feeling like this as well. 

The timing is really bad, and things are moving really quick, 
but i think if this works out in the end, your an excellent pick. 
I trust in you, and my feelings for you are to strong to explain, 
and god knows iv forever got thoughts of you, going round in my brain. 

The scary thing is, you already have so much power in your hands,
The power to break me, i just trust that those arn't your plans.
Your so supportive, and you are always there, 
I know for a fact that you really really care.

Although i have big worries, and theirs problems in our way, 
and i think about them, each and everyday. 
The distance is killing me, and id kill to be in your embrace,
we could make new memories, so the old ones could slowly erase.

Im an emotional mess, i can be quite hard to handle,
I can burn out as easily as the flame on a candle. 
I get hurt easily, and i am passionate in what i believe,
things can be hard when with me, be patient, don't leave. 

Once i commit to you im yours, faithful, loyal and true,
and im scared but looking forward, to the start of something new.
So i don't know if we will work yet, or where this may lead,
but right now just having you in my life, is all i need. 



© 2017 cimmy wuv xxxooo



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Excelent poem cimmy, may I suggest going over the grammer, make it an easier read, but you've taken me away with this poem XD

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

cimmy wuv xxxooo

4 Months Ago

Thank you so much for your review ;)
I really loved this, and I can relate. Thanks for sharing your talent!

Posted 4 Months Ago


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cimmy wuv xxxooo

4 Months Ago

Thank you for your review :)
Stunning work. Very well done. Brilliant piece.

Posted 4 Months Ago


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cimmy wuv xxxooo

4 Months Ago

Thank you :)
I am upset with you for not sending me a read request for this marvellous poem... I loved each and every word and also can relate to it.....beautifully written....

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

cimmy wuv xxxooo

6 Months Ago

Haha sorry. I'm really glad you liked it :)
Najam Us Saher

6 Months Ago

It's okay.... 😀

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cimmy wuv xxxooo
cimmy wuv xxxooo

melbourne, Australia



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Hey everyone im cimmonne (prounced simone) but everyone i know and love calls me cimmy. I'm unique and different and 100 percent me. I have a passion for writing and i want to share my writing with ev.. more..

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