THE OTHER SIDE OF ME!

THE OTHER SIDE OF ME!

A Poem by cimmy wuv xxxooo

I genuinely like who i am, that i know for sure,
but there is another side of me, im searching for. 
Im so dependent, and i hate being left alone, 
if im not with anyone, im probably on the phone. 

My emotions get the best of me, im always a wreck, 
I wish I didn't need someone else to keep me in check. 
If im going to do something new, i want a friend to tag along,
I wish i wasn't so scared, to march to the beat of my own song. 

I want to feel free, but i feel im being held back, 
I always have a boyfriend following in my tracks. 
Though im starting to think, maybe thats just an excuse,
Maybe i shouldn't hold myself back, and let myself loose.

I want to feel confident, independent, secsessful and strong, 
Iv depended on so many people for far to long. 
I want to look in the mirror to see,
a beautiful more happy me. 

I dont want to be afraid if i stumble and fall, 
I want to feel like i wont need anyone there at all. 
Im sick of this pain i always endure, 
I don't want to deal with it anymore. 

I just hope that shes there deep down inside, 
and some day she will no longer hide. 
Because god i need her, and i want her here, 
so i can live life with a little less fear. 






© 2017 cimmy wuv xxxooo



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This is a great poem, well-written with good form & speaking your truth with grace. Clearly you already know where you are & where you want to be. The only thing lacking is to have the courage to face the little bridge of loneliness that we all must face as we embark on our journey to be true to ourselves. There will always be some discomfort when striving for anything worth having. This discomfort seems to cause you to reach for someone, some crutch to distract you from the growth you crave. I know you will get there becuz admitting it is the first step. The best writing comes from people who can be self-honest & you’ve got that in truckloads! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

cimmy wuv xxxooo

1 Month Ago

Such a nice review thank you so much Margie:)



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This is a great poem, well-written with good form & speaking your truth with grace. Clearly you already know where you are & where you want to be. The only thing lacking is to have the courage to face the little bridge of loneliness that we all must face as we embark on our journey to be true to ourselves. There will always be some discomfort when striving for anything worth having. This discomfort seems to cause you to reach for someone, some crutch to distract you from the growth you crave. I know you will get there becuz admitting it is the first step. The best writing comes from people who can be self-honest & you’ve got that in truckloads! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

cimmy wuv xxxooo

1 Month Ago

Such a nice review thank you so much Margie:)
Wow... Beautiful! It's so true, by the way. And the rhyming scheme is just so perfect! It is such a good poem. I loved it. Keep writing!

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

cimmy wuv xxxooo

10 Months Ago

Thank you for the review :)
Anjali

9 Months Ago

no problem!
Very well done. Wisdom is shown all over this. (And I'm a blonde saying that!)

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

cimmy wuv xxxooo

10 Months Ago

Awwwww thanks for the kind words :)
Every good babe im proud of u i love it and i love u xxx

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

cimmy wuv xxxooo

10 Months Ago

Thanks hun :)

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cimmy wuv xxxooo
cimmy wuv xxxooo

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Hey everyone im cimmonne (prounced simone) but everyone i know and love calls me cimmy. I'm unique and different and 100 percent me. I have a passion for writing and i want to share my writing with ev.. more..

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