Our Blue Lagoon (Haiku)

Our Blue Lagoon (Haiku)

A Poem by Enthusiast

 at a tender age

we sampled forbidden fruit
   down by the river
 
your soft lips met mine
in a first tentative kiss
   you made me shiver
 
your embrace was firm
protecting us from the world
   beyond the river
 
I discovered you
as you explored my body
   you made me quiver
 
that day's memory
s'burnt forever in my heart
  as is the river
 
this small gray river
that for us that day became
   our blue lagoon
 

© 2009 Enthusiast


Author's Note

Enthusiast
I wrote this Haiku for a contest, but unfortunately missed the deadline. I decided to add it to my writing anyway.
Your comments are welcome. Thank you.

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