Love Will Come Blowing Back...

                               Love Will Come Blowing Back

                    a ryan luse jam

 

                    verse 1

You walk through youths door to the crowded skies score, to search her star you swear would stay bright

 

A wistful camp-out mission, with some broken-heart fishing, as the sun washes your memories with light

 

You aint going to find that star, her faith has strayed far, you dare nostalgia and run from the embracing track

 

Yet the sun begins to change, because fate likes to rearrange, and that's when love comes blowing back.

 

                    verse 2

You walk through adults motions, towards those turbulent oceans, to search for waves on yesterdays coast

 

A stroll through the suburban streets, if you could only find the beat, when her heart and yours sang so close

 

You aint going to find those waves, wedding vows turned to slaves, this watery horizon becomes everything you lack

 

Yet the ocean begins to change, because fate likes to rearrange, and that's when love comes blowing back.

 

                     verse 3

You walk through old man dreams, where melody aint what it seems, to search for meaning and memory

 

Looking back on your life, your first kiss- your wife, the hour glass is over and starts leaning

 

You aint going to find that memory, the tunnel is setting you free, everything connected as the colors merge to black

 

Than your consciousness begins to change, because fate like to rearrange, and that's when love comes blowing back...

Reviews

[Li Li]

I am interested in knowing what the chorus/hook is on this piece. You have definitely done a great job with the verses. You worded this with depth, then gave it more beauty by gracing it with music. I feel the two should flow together.... words and notes. Notes are words. And vice versa. It's hard to have the talent to be able to combine the two. To find the words that the notes are speaking. Both are strong forms of expression.

Love comes blowing back.... this is very elegantly placed. It has sorrow, but still carries hope.

Again.... would love to hear the hook. Maybe even the music as well.

Bless!

[just is]

Now this is just amazing and so wonderfully written, I liked thsi write alot especially the chorus. Well written.