Create (A Tribute to Arzel Joy)

Create (A Tribute to Arzel Joy)

A Poem by Eric Pudalov
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A spoken word poem dedicated to fellow writer Arzel Joy.

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Destined to create
From the date she was created,
Arzel will not be negated,
Nor will she be emulated!

Are you related 
To these words she composes?

No...
But you absorb through osmosis,
A mind pathway that turns you ferocious,
Until you accept that she's quite
Precocious, and you hear from
These poets, "Of course everyone knows this!"

Yet she's told us her muse,
One whose name you've confused,
Has morphed into a stranger,
Like a mystic form-changer,
A thought that makes souls
Feel like foreign exchangers...

But when her muse is fluoresced,
We see that she has expressed
Her intimate words of the lovers caressed...
And we who write know 
That our feel-
ings
u n d r e s s e d
cre-ate
sense-you-all
pow-er
like we're verbally
SEXED!!

And after...this ecs-
tatic feeling starts... 
to wane,
Arzel, like her fellow poets
Must keep herself sane...

Arzel -
We ask for a dose of
Your verbal cocaine...
So please

Write us a sonnet, 
Villanelle, or quatrain
Because from your poetry
We cannot...

abstain.

© 2014 Eric Pudalov


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Eric Pudalov

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Wow, I am not sure if I can say anything other than that. I loved your.... just everything about this poem. It touched me and I couldn't stop reading it. I feel like I could read this poem over and over again. You have done an amazing job and I hope that I can read more of your work in the future. Thank you for sharing your work with me.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Eric Pudalov

9 Years Ago

Thanks so much, BlackHeart!! I'm really humbled and flattered that you would say that...when I wrot.. read more
BlackHeart

9 Years Ago

I hope that you enjoy mine as much as I enjoy yours and please if you don't like it let me know what.. read more



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"Sense-you-all power..." I love it!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Eric Pudalov

10 Years Ago

Thanks Mel! That's one of my favorite things to do with poetry (divide up words, that is), or do pl.. read more
Blue

10 Years Ago

I think it's creative, too. :) Thanks, Mel.
Awww, this was a really sweet write to dedicate to Arzel! She is quite the good poet =o)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Eric Pudalov

10 Years Ago

Thank you! This is my first time meeting a speedy Hobbit...well, first time for everything, right?
Blue

10 Years Ago

Thank you, SH. I'm honored.
Arzel -
We ask for a dose of
Your verbal cocaine...
So please

Write us a sonnet,
Villanelle, or quatrain
Because from your poetry
We cannot...

abstain.
-couldnt agree more, a great tribute to a very talented young lady and one of my fav poets on here, a phenomenal lady indeed :) :) an the poem is well written too, great piece

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Blue

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Cycy! I'm encouraged by your words.
Eric Pudalov

10 Years Ago

Thanks cycy! She has become one of my favorites recently too. I'm glad you liked the poem as well.
cycy

10 Years Ago

:) :) you are both so welcome
I love Arzel! She is awesome! I'm glad you put that on, ;)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Calibaster

10 Years Ago

I hope she does too. :)
Blue

10 Years Ago

Thank you, Alverrann!
Calibaster

10 Years Ago

You're welcome! ;)
How sweet... I'm sure she appreciates this :)

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Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Blue

10 Years Ago

I do, Silver! Thanks a lot!
Aye she is :) Her poetry is very captivating but I do want to mention this poem is remarkable, perfectly expressing the love fellow poets share for her and her work. Spot on my friend. Well penned.

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Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Eric Pudalov

10 Years Ago

Thanks L4rn! That's really what I was working to get across...I even referenced specific poems of h.. read more
Blue

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much, L4rn13!
A fine tribute, like the broken words, good idea. and the structure here. Excellent.

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Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Eric Pudalov

10 Years Ago

Thanks Leslie! Glad you liked it. I made an audio version too, which I've intended to upload, and .. read more
Blue

10 Years Ago

Thanks a lot, Leslie.
A great tribute to a young brilliant writer. She deserved those precious words.
I'm so proud of Blue!
Thanks for the share.

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Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Eric Pudalov

10 Years Ago

You're very welcome, Dhaye!! And I hope she continues to produce great work...no doubt she will.
Blue

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much, you, two. You're spoiling me. Haha.
Eric Pudalov

10 Years Ago

Oh, we don't want to spoil you too much now, do we?
I really like Arzel's poetry too. She has a flair for what is called "out the box" writing. She is not predictable and this is the best trait of her writing...I said it and I'll say it again, she is one of my favorite writer's on this site. Very appropriate tribute to her...well, ah of what a man would write about a women. My tribute would be slightly different LOL.

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Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Eric Pudalov

10 Years Ago

Ah, perhaps you are referring to the "sexual" lines...I specifically wrote those in reference to som.. read more
Shirlena

10 Years Ago

Well yeah, to me it doesn't read the thinking of a women to a women but I could be wrong...it could .. read more
Blue

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Shirlena. It so happened I'm a fan of your poetry, too. :)
Thats beautiful that you deiced to do this i loved it.~100

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Eric Pudalov

10 Years Ago

Thank you very much Alex! It was fun to write as well.
Blue

10 Years Ago

Thank you, Alex!
Lexi Villanueva

10 Years Ago

Your very welcomed

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Added on March 10, 2014
Last Updated on March 13, 2014
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Eric Pudalov
Eric Pudalov

Atlanta, GA



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I've been writing for a very long time, but now starting to take it a lot more seriously. I primarily write poetry and articles. I'm not currently taking read requests because I have too many, s.. more..

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