Secret Eternity

Secret Eternity

A Poem by Eric Pudalov
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An intense romantic encounter, composed with a magnetic poetry kit.

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devour delicious
velvet girl
rhythming whisper
ferocious flower liquid
melts wild blue night

woman's universe desire
kisses man's glass breath
he growls with broken voice

she softly remembers
his steel embrace,
fever secrets

a red prisoner
of the air
joying
in this frantic
eternity.

© 2018 Eric Pudalov


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"frantic eternity" that completely takes one abreath, :S ----Maynard

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Almost cryptic, yet fairly easy to understand. Love and desire finding sweet expression in the night!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautifully expressed. Nice piece!

Posted 3 Years Ago
Devour he shall... a prisoner of their own sensual desires. Lovely soft piece.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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 Added on January 25, 2018
Last Updated on April 4, 2018
Tags: romance, love, beauty, couple

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Eric Pudalov
Eric Pudalov

Atlanta, GA



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I've been writing for a very long time, but now starting to take it a lot more seriously. I primarily write poetry and articles. I'm not currently taking read requests because I have too many, s.. more..

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