Black Breeze

Written for the group Shades Of Darkness.

All Hallow's Eve, the day of the dead
in the dawning shadows of night hope bled
the iron gate to Hell was shred open wide
the spectres of the damned bloomed a blood tide
the angels upon the Earth could do no more than weep
the black magic of Hell spectres oceans too deep
each human body felt them crawl deep within
the Earth became a blood zone flooded with sin
our eyes took on an unearthly black glow
our skin turned marble white and fangs did grow
black leather became the fashion, wrapped tightly to flesh
sex and blood became our cravings, sin and bleedings always fresh
the jack o' lanterns and black decorations forever hung with care
the black breeze of Nosferatu to eternally ensnare

Reviews

[Coyote Song]

A very dark and chilling poem. Very vivid and alive in the descriptions used. A spooky Halloween poem and one must be glad for that, because otherwise all this
would be true. But then, maybe it is. A superb dark horror Halloween poem. I really do enjoy reading your outstanding work Eric. :)

[Eric Cox]

Thank you!!!! :)

[Enid Blake]

This is great for Halloween, sounds like an apocalypse for sure haha! Brilliant spooky poem :)

[Eric Cox]

Thank you! :)

[Wolf's Dark Song]

Wow, impressive dark horror writing! You're skill shines bright and strong in this shiver inducing poem!

[Eric Cox]

Thank you!!! :)

[Wolf's Dark Song]

:)

[Black Cat Fever]

This is powerful shiver material, made all the hair on me stand up on end. Fantastic horror and that's what this is!!!

[Eric Cox]

Thank you! :)

[Leslie Philibert]

I really like poems about days like All Saint`s Day, or as here All Hallow`s Eve,
days full of magic and mystery, and you worked this theme very well here, good one.

[Eric Cox]

Thanks!

[An owl on the moon]

Brutal, dark magic dances through the shadows of this world... Your flow and rhythm just stir this all to life in autumn's flavor!

[Star Wolf]

What a terrifying poem! You did an awesome job with the descriptions and bringing this fear to life for the reader!

[Eric Cox]

Thanks! :)

[Tina Kline]

Wow this is a fantastic poem! Very impressive work. This is one amazing horror poem. The dark imagery in this, the chilling situation, so fantastic!

[Eric Cox]

Thank you! :)