This certainly has a good rhyming scheme, flow and an atmosphere of dread and tension. It would be even better, if this piece was a little longer, perhaps? The wording is certainly appropriate, for a poem with this sort of theme.
Whilst reading, your creative descriptions help me to imagine this scenario, as if you were portraying a real-life legend or memories! Thankyou, for sharing with with us. And, for entering it in my latest Contest!
This certainly has a good rhyming scheme, flow and an atmosphere of dread and tension. It would be even better, if this piece was a little longer, perhaps? The wording is certainly appropriate, for a poem with this sort of theme.
Whilst reading, your creative descriptions help me to imagine this scenario, as if you were portraying a real-life legend or memories! Thankyou, for sharing with with us. And, for entering it in my latest Contest!
I love this ....awsome chills and thrill in this one sweets...you win! x0x0x Excelent!!! Bravo way to gooooooooooo!! Baby this is your lucky day! Thank you so much for you submission to my contest..im still sitting here shaking.....great poem! I just Love it! x0x0x