Rain And Wind

A touch of humor at a burial.

We were at the cemetery
carrying a coffin to bury
when dark clouds came overhead
and rain came down above the dead
there in the cemetery we got soaking wet
and when a strong wind came we began to fret
when a strong gust hit us we fell down
and the coffin fell to the ground
poor Fred popped out
and began to shout:
"rain, I hate bloody rain
and wind is a pain"
then he crawled back inside and shut the lid
from the rain and wind storm he hid
the rain kept falling
and the wind kept blowing
we took shelter at the mortuary
and poor Fred they never did bury.

Reviews

[Black Cat Fever]

Wickedly dark humor. I love it! Was Fred a zombie?

[Star Wolf]

Dark humor for sure! It gave me a chuckle. Felt sorry for Fred too. Awesome write!

[Wolf's Dark Song]

This made me chuckle. Poor Fred! Don't disturb the dead! Excellent dark humor!

[Tina Kline]

This is dark and humorous. I really enjoyed it a lot! Excellent write!

[Rene Velez]

awesome, funny and dark, good write i enjoyed it

[Sean M. Addams]

like the dark humor of this alot ... a very funny and creative write nice job..