Choppers

Endless rivers of chrome shine
and what a cool unique design
choppers roar under black leather
hear the steel thunder
feel the grasp of power
metal hearts of fire
feel the freedom, the breeze
the magic inside freed
the love of the road
leave behind any load
spread your wings down the highway
rise above times painted grey
choppers shine, roaring under
motorcycles of thunder.

Reviews

[Stacey Watts]

Very nice. I like the way this reads. Longing to be free on the highway. The wind in you hair. Freedom at its best.

[Renée J. Martin]

Oh I do love this one...I can feel the rumble as I read...

[Bats In The Belfry]

I enjoy the line "spread your wings down the highway"...it truly captures the flight feel a bike can give...nice!

[Black Cat Fever]

I love this! It has the cool feel of freedom on the road.
Great job on this Eric.

[Berkeley Street Writer]

Who wouldn't enjoy such freedom? I know I would. Fantastic write!!

[Crimson Wolf]

Very imaginative write. The love of the road does call in this spectacular write.

[Tina Kline]

Fantastic motorcycle poem. Full of action and the promise of adventure. Great job on this write!

[Craig Froman]

You take what some see only as metal and truly breathe into them the life and freedom of the open road... the world that opens up to those who ride.. Powerful.

[Leslie Philibert]

A fine poem that will especially delight Bikers, at something that like no other is a symbol of freedom and self-expression, good work.

[Phantom Rose]

NICE!!!! Well, this is a new side to your poetry! Has a nice modern feel to its rhyme. I like it!!!