motoring toward you ( love senryu)

motoring toward you ( love senryu)

A Poem by jacob erin-cilberto

motoring toward you (love senryu)

 

 

 

i am four wheel drive

trapped in a two wheel body

gunning the engine

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

7/29/15


© 2015 jacob erin-cilberto



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Even in the beginning you were a love machine...go figure ;p

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

3 Weeks Ago

maybe poetically speaking....but not otherwise...ha ha.....but thanks.
j.
I love senryu too
and this one was exemplary
full throttle my friend

N

Posted 8 Months Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

8 Months Ago

thank you, N.
j.
Neville Pettitt

8 Months Ago

Again, my pleasure entirely jacob, N
Mucho desire.
Sensational senryu!

Posted 9 Months Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

9 Months Ago

thank you Frank....
j.
Those are the words i would love to say to my doctor.
With the footnote. Where do i go to get it done.

Posted 1 Year Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

1 Year Ago

i hear you, Paul....
love that response...the doctor, our body's mechanic...

j.. read more
Sounds more like pent up lust Jacob!
Love the short form packed with metaphors.

Posted 1 Year Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

1 Year Ago

thank you, John.
j.
Erin,
Motoring toward you (love senryu). What a happy lighthearted write! I just sat here and felt it's lighthearted message and had to just grin! Thanks for the happy little time in my day. "trapped in a two wheel body: You really gave us all a fantastic poem here! blessings Kathy

Posted 1 Year Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

1 Year Ago

and thank you Kathy....appreciate your words.

j.
ahahahaha what a fine senryu for my morning ..bubbles up the chuckling from me belly :)
E.

Posted 1 Year Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

1 Year Ago

thank you, E.

somehow this one got resurrected much to my surprise...thank you for yo.. read more
Ah, that feeling of spinning the wheels when you want to lay rubber, then stalling out when you dump the clutch. Nicely done, j.

Posted 1 Year Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

1 Year Ago

yes, i have stalled out enough times...even though i do a clutch pretty well.

thanks,.. read more
The visions this creates, the sounds, and the emotions, it's a wonderful analogy as well as a fantastic metaphor! Short sweet and hard to beat...and best of all a perfect count!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Corset

1 Year Ago

they sure do :)
jacob erin-cilberto

1 Year Ago

oh that sounded bad...i meant they just seem to come naturally...i never force them...
Corset

1 Year Ago

I understood
Those words speaks like mountains!

i am four wheel drive
trapped in a two wheel body

Thanks, J.

Posted 1 Year Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

1 Year Ago

thank you, tanmay----

j.

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jacob erin-cilberto

Carbondale, IL



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Originally from Bronx, NY, I live in Carbondale, Illinois...teach English at two community colleges and have been writing and publishing poetry since 1970. Friending works two ways. If we have had .. more..

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