conceptual inflection

conceptual inflection

 

 

 

derivative pleasure,

the root of contextual touching

lips of connotation

reaching for stars of consequence

fingers interloping in several languages

 

there is sequential theme

one voice of love

it's felt rather than heard,

and she is all the meaning

i need

 

 

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

10/3/15

Reviews

[rubie]

you have nailed it here, jacob.

there are no words which adequately describe what love feels like. poets over the ages have tried. some have even come close.

but you have told us that, try as we might, we can only feel it and not really describe or define it.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, rubie...our words always fall short of the description of the real thing.

j.

[Miss Sharon]

Ah.........breathtaking Jacob! ~SP

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for the kind words, Sharon.

j.

[Miss Sharon]

Always my pleasure Jacob! ~SP

[Pryde Foltz]

The rhyme and reason of love … definitely an act of abstract thinking. Wonderful as always, Jacob.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Pryde.

j.

[...]

It is felt in one universal language. I often find no words for what I feel, and then, I come here and read them :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, lynn.

j.

[B]

Once one takes a journey of discovering the word
and finds that it is so limited in nature and volume
to fill many pages and leave the heart a void

A sense of spirituality overtakes all rooms
to learn that truth of emotions
is a radiating warmth felt across words and letters

Monsieur Jacob .... bravo

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Nisreen.

j.

[Ken Simm.]

I like what the fingers are doing in several languages. This is using words in a beautiful, almost mathematical way.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Ken.

j.

[Alfred Kukitz]

Here we are again, great lines (reaching for stars of consequence, she is all meaning), great theme all uncovered in a reader's dream.

Wow!

Regards,
Al

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind review, Al.
j.

[Leslie Philibert]

I missed this one, so I will retrospectively add a few lines. This is another example of the way Jacob binds emotions and semantics, and in this one even transcends language to show the universality of emotions.
Erudite, clever work.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind review, Leslie.

j.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Jacob... this is a Universal love poem...
"searching for stars of consequence"...
A brightly shining Star... Amen... truly, Pat

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Pat.

j.