Bounty

Bounty

A Poem by jacob erin-cilberto

Bounty 

 

 

whereabouts unknown

a poem's potential missing

words sought, "most wanted"

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

10/25/15


© 2015 jacob erin-cilberto



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I read this
and i immediately feel that moment when you have something you want to write
and it nags on you
while you make your coffee
when you are about to leave the house for work

and you sit down
and for the love of god
it wont get released lol

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

jacob erin-cilberto

2 Years Ago

thank you for your words, Nisreen.....sorry i missed this comment until now...

apprec.. read more



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this one resonates with me because my own muse seems to be often held hostage somewhere.

too bad i can't afford the ransom.....

Posted 2 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

2 Years Ago

thank you for your words, rubie.

j.
I hate that moment when you realize that the word you need has chosen to remain elusive. This is particularly trying when writing senryu and haiku. There is no fudging in that form. I really like this piece, nice and succinct and yet it expresses an experience most writers share and understand.

Posted 2 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

2 Years Ago

thank you for your kind review, Geralyn.

j.
This should be written red on a subway wall. I love the heavy feeling of how so much is said in these words. It make more then taken for a ride affect, a concrete willingness that goes down that dark tunnel day after day as the images of people and building like a painting come into the pallet optically tracked. This was very superb and I love the eeriness, yet familiarity it gives..excellent piece

Posted 2 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

2 Years Ago

thank you for your kind review, mojo...
j.
I think one lies under this old dead tree! Come on give me your pen and hand and I lift you up high where poems find eternity.

Hoota Hotta!

Al

Posted 2 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

2 Years Ago

thank you for the smile, Al..

j.
Haha such a smart little poem. I'm searching for her as well.

Posted 2 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

2 Years Ago

thank you for your words, Kee.
j.
I love this poem and how you play in great words about the most wanted and the bounty on the head for a poet or poetess. An excellent one...:)..................

Posted 2 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

2 Years Ago

thank you, my friend.

j.
Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

You are welcome, my good friend...:).................
gosh, I know I haven't written much lately or anything worthy for that matter BUT.... Thank you! I needed a swift kick!:)

Posted 2 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

2 Years Ago

thank you for your words and the smile, Queenie.

j.
Oh that muse can be very elusive at times.

Posted 2 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

2 Years Ago

yes, she can, dale...

thank you,

j.
I read this
and i immediately feel that moment when you have something you want to write
and it nags on you
while you make your coffee
when you are about to leave the house for work

and you sit down
and for the love of god
it wont get released lol

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

jacob erin-cilberto

2 Years Ago

thank you for your words, Nisreen.....sorry i missed this comment until now...

apprec.. read more
Only you could have put it so brilliantly... another master stroke of your pen!

Posted 2 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

2 Years Ago

thank you for your kind words, DIVYA...

j.

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jacob erin-cilberto
jacob erin-cilberto

Carbondale, IL



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Originally from Bronx, NY, I live in Carbondale, Illinois...teach English at two community colleges and have been writing and publishing poetry since 1970. Friending works two ways. If we have had .. more..

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