pleasant infractions

pleasant infractions

instigator winks 

a simile of lashes

like encroachment 

off-sides,

but she declines the penalty

then throws a smile in his direction,

his heart intercepts 

they both win.

erin-cilberto

12/27/15

Reviews

[Miss Sharon]

Score!! I love this Jacob...you clever master of innuendo. ~SP

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Sharon.

j.

[A hare off]

Both sides score on the same play as holding is now legal and Xs and Os no longer mean positions. Nice writing Jacob.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

clever reply, A hare....thank you for your words...

j.

[...]

take it home, Jacob, take it home :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, lynn...
j.

[KWP]

'and now folks we got a real game on our hands'

'he may have been messin' around all season but with that last interface it looks like he's settling in for the long haul to turn this thing around. Let's just wait and see how the visitors react.'

:) nice one Jacob X

[jacob erin-cilberto]

a clever reply, KWP...thanks for your words and the smile.

j.

[Pryde Foltz]

Penalties are good for much really. Play on with love:)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, play on...thank you, Pryde.

j.

[Kelsey Ann]

I don't watch football, so I don't really understand the metaphor, but it's a great piece nonetheless :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Kelsey Ann...
j.

[Einstein Noodle]

TOUCH DOWN!!!! :) and will they make it to the Super Bowl?? and will you be reporting ;)
E.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

stay tuned...:)))
thank you, E.

j.

[Einstein Noodle]

for sure young man! :) ... and most welcome!

[Alfred Kukitz]

Could this lead to a pick six? Stay tuned after a ten thousand word commercial.

Regards,
Al

[jacob erin-cilberto]

long commercial...mmm....thank you, Al.

j.

[iand63]

That was always my problem, I never understood the off - side rule and always fell foul of the ref. Plus being short-sighted I could never find the goal. Sweet little piece Jacob.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind review, iand.

j.

[alifeacoustic]

And all because of a smile. It's certainly a pity more people don't use the ready supply of them at their disposal.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

that is true...thank you, alife..

j.