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A Poem by jacob erin-cilberto


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your voice trailed off

like letters disappearing 

from a printer low on ink

 

promises made with wispy intent,

but days pass

each a copy of another

 

fading into an essay

no longer legible

to the naked eye of us...

 

 

erin-cilberto

7/10/16

© 2016 jacob erin-cilberto


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I know the feeling . . . everything my life used to be ten years ago has faded like a print-out from an empty ink cartridge (amazing imagery!) Some days I feel like I'm just writing to distract myself awhile longer, until I can finally be excused from this difficult exercise in humility. I wish I could say things will get better, but I'm lacking in hopefulness right now. The only truthful thing I can say is that many of us tender hearts are feeling this way lately (((HUGS)))

Posted 7 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

7 Years Ago

thank you for sharing and understanding, barleygirl

j.
There is sadness in this poem, sheltered in the images to which most writers can relate (great images!). Beautiful, as is always expected from your poetry.

Posted 7 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

7 Years Ago

thank you for your kind words, Karen.

j.
I like how the imagery is simple enough to understand this poem's message on growing apart.

Posted 7 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

7 Years Ago

thank you for your words, Sprint.

j.
Beautifully written. Short and exact. I love the economy of words in your writing. You do not waste a single word. Each one meaningful and necessary.

Posted 7 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

7 Years Ago

thank you for your kind review, Ananya...

j.
Wonderful use of language and beautiful analogy. Loved every line :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

7 Years Ago

thank you, Marcus...

j.
You write so eloquently, Jacob, and with such feeling. I always enjoy reading your poetry. Thank you for sharing your wonderful gift with us. I have been in this spot more times than I care to remember and it is not a fun place to be.

Posted 7 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

7 Years Ago

thank you for reading me...and for the kind words, Suzanna...

i get much inspiration .. read more
SJ Mullins

7 Years Ago

There are some very good ones (like yourself). :)
did the voice really trail off or were we so far away that we could not hear the hidden meanings?

Posted 7 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

7 Years Ago

probably too far away....thank you for your visit and your words, Shabeeh.

j.
The words blur as the love that was printed there dies on the page.

Posted 7 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

7 Years Ago

your response is a poem in itself...

thank you, KL...

j.
I think we often start off with clear and ambitious intentions that fade then over time.

Posted 7 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

7 Years Ago

yes, i think we do...thank you, Ana...

j.
Kind of good thing when that happens. Out with old, gives better focus to the new. Supremely good writing, here:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

7 Years Ago

thank you for your words, Pryde

j.

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jacob erin-cilberto
jacob erin-cilberto

Carbondale, IL



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Originally from Bronx, NY, I live in Carbondale, Illinois...teach English at a community college and have been writing and publishing poetry since 1970. I am here to read for inspiration from other po.. more..

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