what's in store

what's in store

A Poem by jacob erin-cilberto


what's in store


spend your moons
it's a Woolworth patch
on a blazing, burning itch of skin

the cool white ointment within
covers perfectly in the south
beams of balm

soothing feeling priceless
just put it back on the shelf
when the bandage comes off.


erin-cilberto
8/18/17

© 2017 jacob erin-cilberto



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WOW! I don't think anyone could be more imaginative when writing about an eclipse! I love the ongoing metaphor of skin & ointment & soothing . . . plus the bandage coming off -- I can almost feel that! *smile* Fondly, Margie

Posted 1 Year Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

1 Year Ago

thank you for your kind review, barleygirl.
j.
Never a good omen those blackouts - 21st August looms and so does the war games on NK's border. What will our loony-toons pair do?

Posted 1 Year Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

1 Year Ago

thank you for digging between the lines...appreciate your visits, Tony.
j.
Tony Jordan

1 Year Ago

well I honestly appreciate you saying that Jacob
What is a Woolworth patch? Just curious.

Posted 1 Year Ago


William Gardner

1 Year Ago

I remember woolworths, I'm just not sure what the patch is. Thanks!
jacob erin-cilberto

1 Year Ago

the moon covering the sun....
William Gardner

1 Year Ago

HAHA! That did not occur to me, Thank you!

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jacob erin-cilberto
jacob erin-cilberto

Carbondale, IL



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Originally from Bronx, NY, I live in Carbondale, Illinois...teach English at two community colleges and have been writing and publishing poetry since 1970. Friending works two ways. If we have had .. more..

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