at the last stand

at the last stand

 

 

lemonade rain comes

clouds squeezed in citrus lament

nickel love sold out

 

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

8/25/17

Reviews

[Fabian G. Franklin]

I'll just bet it was all set up on the far side of a cardboard box near a busy street. Always a pleasure to read your words.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Fabian....you are a kind poet.

j.

[Alisa Js]

Hello Jacob,

Very nice senryu...

nice imagery throughout..

Alisa

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Alisa.
j.

[Alisa Js]

You are very welcome.

[DIVYA]

Created a beautiful, unusual picture in my mind...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, DIVYA...
j.

[DIVYA]

You are most welcome, Mr. Jacob.