capitulating against the mouth of the wind

capitulating against the mouth of the wind

A Poem by jacob erin-cilberto


capitulating against the mouth of the wind

 

 

category five

his dialogue is no jive

unfortunately

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

8/27/17


© 2017 jacob erin-cilberto



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As ever intelligently formed prose poetry.. and tragic as it stand: the weather is cruel and crippling in Texas and there abouts. As to reading between the lines.. would I dare say anything undiplomatic!

Posted 3 Months Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

3 Months Ago

thank you for your words, my friend.....
j.
This is a great one. Is it about Trump, the hurricane, or both?
Who cares, it was a fun read.
Nice Senryu/Haiku!

Posted 3 Months Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

3 Months Ago

Thank you, Z.

j.
Very clever.
His dialogue...

Posted 3 Months Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

3 Months Ago

thank you, Bacchus....
j.
We pray for all the people in the states affected by Hurricane Harvey..we pray for all the people in the states affected by "the D" ( D for Disaster).
Both "category fives" but which "trumps" which in degree of devastation??? Great senryu!

Posted 3 Months Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

3 Months Ago

thank you, Annette,

j.
Ha Trump caught in the gust. So sincerely and well penned Jacob!

Posted 3 Months Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

3 Months Ago

thank you, John......

j.

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jacob erin-cilberto
jacob erin-cilberto

Carbondale, IL



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Originally from Bronx, NY, I live in Carbondale, Illinois...teach English at two community colleges and have been writing and publishing poetry since 1970. Friending works two ways. If we have had .. more..

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