magnetically mistaken

magnetically mistaken

 

 

 

impressions,

response elicited

movement of heart,

directions contemplated

 

expectations,

response elicited

movement of heart,

separate paths initiated

 

 

erin-cilberto

1/11/18

Reviews

[Jimmy Yetts]

Magnetically, opposites attract and likes repel.
Romantically, relationships that tend to last are often the reverse.
If only we could know, for sure, when the same path should be "initiated."
Unique bit of work!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Jimmy,
j.

[Karen Redburn]

A poem about "thinking" you might be attracted to someone? Maybe, thinking oneself into believing there is attraction, but when learning about the person realizing they are not the fantasy one hoped for? I don't know, just my take. I enjoy thinking poems through. Great job of making me think! Cheers.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind review, Karen.
j.

[R.E. Ray]

Raw perfection, J? An original, fitting metaphor and brevity packed into one piece. Good one, sir!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Robert.

j.

[andrew mitchell]

Its funny how one has to get close to determine whether to repel. Nice write Jacob as always you deliver!:)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words,
j.

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

I like it
I like most of your stuff
Do nt scrap it

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Julie.
j.

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Very different stimulii and heartbeats-relational arrhythmias perhaps. Very different responses. So much for ‘Pavlov’ when it comes to ‘real love’. Witty, profound, genius metaphor always!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind review, Annette....i am not so sure about this one...almost scrapped it...but your words are encouraging.
j.