stream of consciousness with no conscience

stream of consciousness with no conscience

A Poem by jacob erin-cilberto

stream of consciousness with no conscience

 

 

intermediate adjectives

identify proper people

with improper verbiage

and adverb hands modify too closely

 

in uncomfortable font

an abomination of silent language

which needs to be double-spaced

but is too close upon

ears abused from the din

 

there are sentences for this

and they should be long and complex

with no periods

ever,

 

run-on, run-on, run-on,

well deserved.

 

 

erin-cilberto

1/27/18


© 2018 jacob erin-cilberto



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A "stream of consciousness with no conscience" is dangerously polluted.
They doth protest too much regarding grievances never properly conceived nor, therefore, clearly cited.
Maybe.

Posted 7 Months Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

7 Months Ago

thank you for your insights, Jimmy.
j.
"proper people with improper verbiage"....seems that there are far too many of those people around these days and I can't even think of the right adjectives to pin on them! The collective hearing of the country has been abused lately....no doubt of that. Long complex sentences can not adequately describe the world these days. Again, your words are just enough to spark thought....and I like that. Lydi**

Posted 8 Months Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

8 Months Ago

thank you for your kind and insightful review, Lydi.
j.
Creative writing for the unwary...

Posted 8 Months Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

8 Months Ago

thank you, Chris.
j.
This reads for me like a rowdy disruptive crowd maybe demonstrating and everyone not involved wants them to just move on. That’s my take lol.

Posted 8 Months Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

8 Months Ago

interesting interpretation, andrew...i like that.
thank you,
j.

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jacob erin-cilberto
jacob erin-cilberto

Carbondale, IL



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Originally from Bronx, NY, I live in Carbondale, Illinois...teach English at two community colleges and have been writing and publishing poetry since 1970. Friending works two ways. If we have had .. more..

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