stream of consciousness with no conscience

stream of consciousness with no conscience

A Poem by jacob erin-cilberto

stream of consciousness with no conscience



intermediate adjectives

identify proper people

with improper verbiage

and adverb hands modify too closely


in uncomfortable font

an abomination of silent language

which needs to be double-spaced

but is too close upon

ears abused from the din


there are sentences for this

and they should be long and complex

with no periods



run-on, run-on, run-on,

well deserved.





© 2018 jacob erin-cilberto

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"proper people with improper verbiage"....seems that there are far too many of those people around these days and I can't even think of the right adjectives to pin on them! The collective hearing of the country has been abused doubt of that. Long complex sentences can not adequately describe the world these days. Again, your words are just enough to spark thought....and I like that. Lydi**

Posted 2 Weeks Ago

jacob erin-cilberto

2 Weeks Ago

thank you for your kind and insightful review, Lydi.
Creative writing for the unwary...

Posted 3 Weeks Ago

jacob erin-cilberto

3 Weeks Ago

thank you, Chris.
This reads for me like a rowdy disruptive crowd maybe demonstrating and everyone not involved wants them to just move on. That’s my take lol.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago

jacob erin-cilberto

3 Weeks Ago

interesting interpretation, andrew...i like that.
thank you,

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Added on January 28, 2018
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jacob erin-cilberto
jacob erin-cilberto

Carbondale, IL

Originally from Bronx, NY, I live in Carbondale, Illinois...teach English at two community colleges and have been writing and publishing poetry since 1970. Friending works two ways. If we have had .. more..