Today

Today

A Poem by jacob erin-cilberto

Today

 

 

and in the last year

digesting the missing you

your sun placates me

 

 

 

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

3/3/18


© 2018 jacob erin-cilberto



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Time heals all wounds, but not without a scar to remind us. Short, yet still thought-provoking. Very intriguing!

Posted 6 Months Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

6 Months Ago

thank you, Kelli.
j.
Short but sweet. You’ve managed to squeeze so much impact into so few lines. I would love to learn to do this as affective lay as you’ve done here. Thanks for sharing this Jacob

Posted 6 Months Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

6 Months Ago

thank you for your words, Dotty.
j.
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mou
when I try to hate, remember 'it' for once (only for the purpose of awakening the anger) and finally get that it was not 'just once' but 'million'..oh I just hate this game..but I love your poem too much..though I like your every words but it has some different reason ..thanks for sharing this wonderful write
mou.

Posted 6 Months Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

6 Months Ago

thank you for your kind words, mou.
j.
This is so powerful...three short lines. We miss our loved ones more in the year of firsts than we do after time passes, but the wonderful memories....the sun....keep us going. Beautifully emotional. Lydi**

Posted 6 Months Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

6 Months Ago

thank you for your kind review, Lydi.
j.
Short but impactful.
Good traditional haiku linking back to nature and longing

Posted 6 Months Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

6 Months Ago

thank you, Alessander...i find haiku and senryu the only form poetry i like to write...
mostl.. read more
This was very moving ...thank you for sharing such deep and meaningful moments .. spring is in the air:)

Posted 6 Months Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

6 Months Ago

thank you, Hebe...you are kind.

j.
A year, already. Where does the time go when it feels like only yesterday you were saying goodbye? As with all your writings, I hang upon your every word, Jacob. Such a touching, moving piece. Thank you for sharing this one!

Posted 6 Months Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

6 Months Ago

thank you, Kelly...the last two poems were really about two people...a friend i lost many years ago .. read more
There is a certain sadness, but also beauty here
anniversaries are such telling times, I fear....

Go well jacob


Posted 6 Months Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

6 Months Ago

thank you, Neville...
j.
Distance makes heart grow fonder- silence separates not distance- well written🌹

Posted 6 Months Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

6 Months Ago

thank you, Kelly...
j.
‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

6 Months Ago

My pleasure🌹
Clever and lovely senryu.
An insightful creation!

Posted 6 Months Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

6 Months Ago

thank you for your kind words, Jimmy.
j.

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jacob erin-cilberto
jacob erin-cilberto

Carbondale, IL



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Originally from Bronx, NY, I live in Carbondale, Illinois...teach English at two community colleges and have been writing and publishing poetry since 1970. Friending works two ways. If we have had .. more..

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