are there really bars on the windows

are there really bars on the windows

 

 

 

dried moons,

psychopathic lips

kiss crazy

 

arms bound in strait jacket embrace

lovely white room midnight with you

 

and no prescription can repel

the frantic need

as love's addiction

draws me into your veins

 

i want us to break out together

run for our lives

with shattering steps toward oblivion

where no one can see us

 

we will hide in the shadows of insanity

knowing full well,

we are only crazy for each other

 

and the

ups and downs we only think we imagine

are real.

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

4/28/18

Reviews

[Lydia Shutter]

Decadently romantic....to be crazy in love and to only want to be alone with that person....ah, yes. Love can be a form of insanity and certainly is addicting, but we willingly become addicts over and over again. Lydi**

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Lydi...i like that..Decadently romantic...mmm
it gets us bouncing off the rubber room walls.
j.

[Lydia Shutter]

They're coming to take me away...HA HA...to the funny farm....:)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

"where life is beautiful all the time"----:)))
Napolean Bonaparte the III

wonder whatever happened to that one hit wonder.

[Lydia Shutter]

LOL I knew you would remember....and who knows? So many one hit wonders!

[Ranger Kessel]

hey this is a great write. Love the title and the content. Thanks for posting.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Ranger.
j.

[Alfred Kukitz]

oh baby! classic jacob. I loved the title before i read the poem now i love the poem more! you amaze me!

regards,
al

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Al.
j.

[kitty]

An unusually gripping piece. love it! to be away from it all and be one in the presence of each other!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, kitty.
j.

[Chris Shaw]

Crazy, crazy loving. Another great title. Titles are important. I am left thinking, how many of us actually experience that off the planet type of loving. And if we do, it doesn't stay that way. It would be too exhausting.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind review, Christine.
j.

[Neville]

This is a fine example of the crazy intoxicating longing we all want to experience.... only from the outside of the asylum, looking in.... Having worked in many psychiatric institutions over a period of many years.. I can say without any fear of contradiction... there can be love on those wards and true........ Neville x4 T's and hold the sugar....

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i really appreciate this review...thank you, Neville.
j.

[Neville]

so glad I found these words, they are kinda special...... N

[Ardra]

we will hide in the shadows of insanity
knowing full well,
we are only crazy for each other

Love these lines.... a lot...
This kind of craziness has no cure....

I love the part of the headings you come up with.. I always struggle to get a proper title for my poems...:)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Rapunzel.
j.

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

Oh to be able to escape into lovers land with the one true love that fills your every need that soft gentle love of wanting and knowing is only yours to be shared as one- love the words- straightjacket- prescription- oh the depths of love when returned and wanting to be where it is facing the heart and not afraid- wonderful🌹

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your insightful words, Kelly.
j.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Always a pleasure Thankyou for your wonderful inspiring words- touches deep🌹