gated inflections (a senryu)

gated inflections (a senryu)

 

 

you keep me spellbound,

but possessing limited

vocabulary

 

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

11/10/18

Reviews

[Jimmy Yetts]

Don't know to whom you're referring (though, "gated" might be a big clue.)
Occurs to me, however, if "limited vocabulary" is the criterion, I live in a neighborhood full of people who would spellbind the hell out of you.
Intriguing senryu, J!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

and your neighborhood sounds intriguing as well.
thanks,
j.

[Lydia Shutter]

It is the mystery of it all that keeps you wanting more! Good Senryu. Lydi**

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Lydi.
j.

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

Is it strange that I feel like you are a quiet man ...who speaks all the time? My imagery of you is your poem itself. Forever amazing me into silent ponderings that I can't express fully.....

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Crippled Queen.
j.

[Coyote Poetry]

Less talk, keep us out of trouble. Nice use of words Jacob. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Coyote.
j.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[Fran Marie]

Who needs words as long as the spell works..

[jacob erin-cilberto]

so true, Fran Marie, so true...thank you,
j.

[Ardra]

Some how this made me think of two people with language barrier....trying to communicate.... And yet he is amused and awestruck with her....without enough words to form the connection... lovely write J.
:)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Ardra.
j.

[KWP]

this made me smile ...

it's all in the eyes anyway right?

or ... is it a blow up doll ... hahahahahaha :D

[jacob erin-cilberto]

you're too funny...thank you, KWP.
j.

[KWP]

Hahahahaha ... love that ... wasn’t sure how you’d take that one 😂😂😂

Much love X

[andrew mitchell]

there are no words for being spellbound, its a state of awe to say the least!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

or we just can't find the words...thank you, andrew.
j.

[andrew mitchell]

yes beyond words too lol

[KeeD]

I feel that way about my dog a lot lately. Mystical creatures and they somehow get the message across.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Kee.
j.

[CD Campbell]

You must be referring to a topless dancer. Witty there j.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

:)

never thought of that here, but it fits...
thank you, CD.
j.