edict (a cinquain)

edict  ( a cinquain)  

awkward

my lips are sealed

yours touch mine with yearning

implications of love decreed

i yield

erin-cilberto

11/24/18

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

Good to see you having a go at one of these Jacob. Lorry's on a roll with them at the moment. I love this, brings me pictures of such awkwardness. Not quite expecting or ready, but hey give it a try anyway. Hope the experience yielded much fruit.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Chris.
j.

[Ana Papaya]

I like it. it feels like yielding to something/someone forbidden or taboo

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Ana.
j.

[Lorry]

Brilliantly done Jacob. And that, is the story of our lives. Awkward, yielding, Yep. Could be the biography of man :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Lorry,
j.

[Cherrie Palmer]

What a great blending of imagery, that brings our imagination full circle.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Cherrie...
j.