icicle's ingenious argument

icicle’s ingenious argument

 

 

 

 

warm hearts burn themselves out

cold creates callous chaos

we can live with

in blind confusion's abode.

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

2/15/19

Reviews

[¿]

I love frozen things sometimes....and I also frost my heart at times in order to make it safe....many does like that...mostly in despair...

But, every cause has a reason you surely know....
flammable or non-combustible can change their qualities as per their situations...
Another fine write from you...Be blessed :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Tahsin...
and i look forward to reading much more from you.
j.

[¿]

That's really generous of you dear Jacob...You're warmly welcome and be in grace🌟

[Ana Papaya]

when you freeze things they last longer, that's what I've learned
so living with a frozen heart is not ideal but I think it spares us the slow painful death of a heart on fire

[jacob erin-cilberto]

oooh, yes...there is truth in that statement.
thank you, Ana,
j.

[Ted Kniffen]

'blind confusion'...not to be mistaken for 'mass delusion'...though nowadays there is a case to be made for that...chaos theory...or lemmingade...take your pick.
The alliteration jumps out in this, j.

A good write.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Ted,
j.

[Cherrie Palmer]

What a great play on words, did this poem hit you in one thought and image or did it just happen?

[jacob erin-cilberto]

kind of just tumbled out as one thought...thank you, Cherrie,
j.

[Coyote Poetry]

Very nice use of words. You made the reader ponder and think the statement written. Thank you Jacob for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Coyote,
j.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Jacob.

[Chris Shaw]

Icicles change state. You either have the big freeze, or you can wait for the thaw. Most relationships have both. The thaw though is most beautiful when it comes after a freeze.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, it is, Chris...yes it is.
thank you,
j.

[Paul Bell]

When the fire burns it burns.
Sadly when the embers die, a cold reality blows from the north and the igloo freezes hell over.
Still, tomorrows another day.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, it is, as Scarlett O'Hara would have said..
thank you, Paul...once made an igloo in my back yard up in Lockport...was cold enough that the igloo lasted three weeks...could almost stand up in it.
j.

[Paul Bell]

I managed half of one before I ran out of snow once.
You have total respect for the art of igloo building.

[Stella Armour]

cold is hard and it stings like icicles, but sometimes warmth can thaw and rekindle .....

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your insight, Stella,
j.

[Onlyme]

When love is not returned sadly people do become bitter and cold.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

so true...thank you Dawn,
j.

[andrew mitchell]

there is a climate change within our hearts especially with today's generation. There is no love anymore or on the definition of it!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i am finding i fear that is true, andrew...
thank you much.