Creature of Delight

You worship for my pleasure

Spicy scent of a sensual promise,

Air kisses, mouth playing in the shilouette,

Eyes are dark, pools of drowning fiery desire,

The sound of your breathing,

A capturing magical spell,

caught I am willingly in this tangled web.

Hard firm flesh and skin burning,

In peachy fair of deliscious color.

This creature of pleasure worshipped me.

I became the beauty Aphrodite between the sheets.

Reviews

[Echoes of Eros]

Hushed whispers breathe out such soft music of desire and delight. Each scent and sound and sensual touch is perfectly etched on the mind and body. Surely we were made for such ecstasy. xo

[ErosNthanatos]

In synced in the moment and person, yes.

[soliloquy]

Such sweet descriptions of sensual pleasure. I appreciate your skill since i sometimes write that genre as well.

[ErosNthanatos]

Enjoy writing such delights and escapes

[An owl on the moon]

Just catching my breath. Oh my! Everything here is simply enchanted music that dances in the mind.. a wild wonder! The scene unfolds in sweetest desires.

[ErosNthanatos]

Desire is the name
To enslave is the game :)

[Michael Kevin Spencer]

Is it bad that I want a woman who knows this particular spell?

Enticing stuff Eros!

[ErosNthanatos]

Thank you for your kind words

[Alexander Rodgers]

I love the description and flow of this piece, I can see what you mean. ''In peachy fair of delicious color'' is a brilliant line. You write with a more old fashioned sense of things, and that's great. Reminds me of some of the great poets like Walt Whitmen or Robert Frost. Keep up the good work!

[ErosNthanatos]

Thank you love...I would like to fantasize that I'm a child of the classics😉

[Alexander Rodgers]

You're welcome! Keep writing great work like that and some day you will be :)

[ErosNthanatos]

Ahh... They are on their own stature already in the stratosphere. I just write for pleasure and to be mentioned in the likes of them is an honor.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Oooo la la!
You have clearly captured a pleasant vision...okay, more than pleasant, absolutely delicious!
Nicely done.

[ErosNthanatos]

We have something in common that we share...delicious is the right word my friend ;)

[Frieda P]

Tantalizing picture you've painted here, lovely last line. Nicely pen'd this one.

[ErosNthanatos]

Thank you Jersey

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

An intellectually sensual tease... we all need some naughtiness to keep us sane in this crazy world.

[ErosNthanatos]

A dash or a sprinkle will do.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

:)