Dying inside

Dying inside

A Poem by erums

“Why didn’t you come out with us last Friday"

I didn’t want to(I have anxiety)

"Why did you not look both ways, you almost got hit”

I don’t care (I want to die)

“You should try harder in school you could make a difference in the world"

It doesn’t matter(I’ll be dead anyways)

"Why are you crying”

I’m not sure(I’m broken inside)

“Are you okay”

I’m fine (I’m dying inside)

© 2017 erums

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WOW!! So powerful and so emotional.

Posted 2 Months Ago

Very sad piece but also very honest and truthful. I like the sense of vulnerability this piece has, I mean it's about what you truly think, and being able to share that in writing takes a lot of guts.

Good work :)

Posted 3 Months Ago

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Added on December 7, 2017
Last Updated on December 7, 2017



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