New Perspective

New Perspective

A Poem by Snow Angel


I've found an exhilarating new view that I've haven't seen anything like it before
I'm on a tall mountain and I'm cautious to take the next step
The thought of losing my balance is frightening
I view the sight of the light blue sky, pearl white clouds, and shining sun
A cool breeze that caresses my skin and puts me at ease
This new perspective gives me the courage to begin my new journey to find happiness  

© 2017 Snow Angel



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Journeys are life and make it what it becomes to us.
Nice structure of lines and lacking most punctuation-might add some--mostly at the ending,
perspective is something that gives to reflections and deep thinking at certain times.
This can cause differences in personality.
overall, wonderful insight!

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Snow Angel

3 Months Ago

I always appreciate your reviews. Your're a sweet heart. You understand my writing so well.
Josie E. Cook M. A.

3 Months Ago

:)
Thank you, too!
JEC



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Journeys are life and make it what it becomes to us.
Nice structure of lines and lacking most punctuation-might add some--mostly at the ending,
perspective is something that gives to reflections and deep thinking at certain times.
This can cause differences in personality.
overall, wonderful insight!

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Snow Angel

3 Months Ago

I always appreciate your reviews. Your're a sweet heart. You understand my writing so well.
Josie E. Cook M. A.

3 Months Ago

:)
Thank you, too!
JEC
Nature always inspires us. I really liked the way you described the scene, it was upto the mark.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Snow Angel

3 Months Ago

Yes it really does. Some views are so inspiring just by its beauty alone. Thank you I'm glad you lik.. read more
Najam Us Saher

3 Months Ago

I agree with you.
You are most welcome :)
touching write,enjoyed it

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Snow Angel

3 Months Ago

Thank you for taking the time to read and review my work. Your're so kind. I'm glad you like it.
 wordman

3 Months Ago

my pleasure
The thought of losing my balance is frightening. You see though what is waiting for you after you take those next few cautionary steps. Those steps indeed provide you with the courage to go soar on.

A very good piece of work.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Snow Angel

3 Months Ago

Thank you Dave. I love how you always understand my writing and noticed important parts of it. I app.. read more
Very good i enjoyed this one, specially the end..beautifully penned

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Snow Angel

3 Months Ago

Thank you! :) I'm glad you liked it.

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Added on May 9, 2017
Last Updated on October 6, 2017
Tags: perspective, psychology, emotions, search, scared, satisfied, motivated

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Snow Angel
Snow Angel

Toms River, NJ



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