The First Nightmare

In Alison's nightmare-

 

I woke up in a strange place. I looked around me, and realized that I was in a cage. I looked around the room, (which was splattered with blood almost everywhere), and I saw a butcher's knife on a small wooden table. I noticed that the lock on the cage that I was in, was loose... I got the lock off, and I got out of the cage.

 

I walked around the room, when sudenly I heard some kind of animal growling from behind me. I turned around and this strange dog just stratched me with it's claws. It ran away and left it's collar behind. While holding my wound with my right hand, I picked up the collar and read it.

 

''Hewie.' Such a strange name for a dog.'

I said.

 

Then I saw this hallway, and I walked into it....The more deeper I walked into the  path, the more darkness surrounded me..

 

 

Author's Note

I made this short, for those of you (maybe not a lot of you) who won't want to read so much. I got the inspiration from a video game. Comment and tell me what you think. :)

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A very short chapter. I like the attention to detail. You create a wild vision of the girl in the cage. A very good short chapter.
Coyote

[Angelauthor1204]

nicely done.

[nono]

hmm it's really shot, but you put a lot of detail into it so nice job! I like it and I have to read from the beginning...lol Nice job though!

[~Lizzy♬]

I think it is really good so far. I want to read more so please write more fast!!! ;)

Oh and what game did you get inspired by?

[(JR) Joshua Hernandez]

ooohhh, what game its a nice poem awesome

[Keevan]

Awesome. I can't wait to read what happens next!

[KaySea]

very nice