Broken

I stared at you, and as I looked into your golden eyes, you stabbed your sword through my chest. Tears rolled down my cheeks. I felt the pain, I felt the wetness, as the blood splattered out of me, as you pulled the sword out. You snickered.

 

'I told you. I'm a monster. Stay away.'

You said.

 

You ran away, and I dropped to the floor covered, in blood, I looked up at you, as you ran. I felt more tears fall....

 

'Why....'

I said as I fainted.

 

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The next morning I woke up, and saw your face. You were wrapping bandages, around my bare chest. I blushed, for I'm girl, and for me to have a man like you, see my chest made me embaressed.

 

'I told you so.'

You said as you finished wrapping the bandages.

 

'What... no. I could never leave you.'

I said.

 

'You don't understand. We can't continue to love each other. You're so many years away from being an adult. I'm a fully grown man. And on top of that, I'm a monster. I can't protect you, when the fullmoon appears.'

He said.

 

I got up, and kissed him on the cheek.

 

'I'm only a few years away from your age. You're not that much older. And I don't care. I can take care of myself.'

I said.

 

You just sighed and said

'I want to protect you, but... if I can't I should just leave you now.'

 

Tears feel down my face. You wiped my tears with your finger.

 

'Please... no tears, this is hard enough for me to do.'

You said as you hugged me and walked out the door.

 

You walked out the house, and I heard you start your car. I sighed, and I sat in a corner on the floor.

 

I can't just let him walk away. We've made it this far. I have to convince him to stay.

 

I ran outside, but your car wasn't there anymore. I sat down on my porch, and began to cry.

 

Without you, life isn't worth living.

 

I walked out onto the street. I lay down on the street, and a car was driving towards me. The car had hit me, and that was the moment I died.

 

Hours later you called my phone, but no one answered. You sighed and you went to my house. My friend was there, and she told you the painful truth.

 

Your eyes filled with tears....

 

 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

This is a wild and crazy story. Started with a stabbing then he repaired her. The discussion was interesting. A very sad ending to a powerful story. Thank you. A excellent story.
Coyote

[Angelauthor1204]

nicely done.

[KaySea]

very good work

[Luna Northstar]

Awwww, this is so touching/sad :(

[My Fair Lady]

Another intersing piece. There are a few technical things to work, but over all that was good.

[NXT Eoin]

this is really touching

[(JR) Joshua Hernandez]

wow, very nice piece, very veyr good