Goodnight

Goodnight

A Poem by Ethan
"

My first haiku...

"

Stars have been turned off.

The night sky is cold and black.

God must be sleeping.


© 2017 Ethan



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nice haiku there ethan. since haiku is short, some may think it's pretty easy to compose, well i'm not sure about that...how you have to compress everything into a 17 syllable poem and convey the message through implication and expression of allusion . a poem written in this form is very difficult for me. good job!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ethan

1 Year Ago

Thanks you!



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Positively outstanding. Bravo!

Posted 8 Months Ago


Perfect!!! So much meaning in just a few short words. Amazing

Posted 8 Months Ago


very very nicely written thanks for sharing this wonderful piece.

Posted 10 Months Ago


Well done! I love how versatile you are with your writing! Love this piece! Tabby

Posted 12 Months Ago


Who will watch us at night?

Posted 1 Year Ago


I love it! Very good for your first Haiku.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ethan

1 Year Ago

Thanks Zeldablue
Short and simple but also elegant and fascinating!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ethan

1 Year Ago

Thanks!!!!
Good job. Short and sweet, just how I like 'em.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ethan

1 Year Ago

Hahaha thanks
nice haiku there ethan. since haiku is short, some may think it's pretty easy to compose, well i'm not sure about that...how you have to compress everything into a 17 syllable poem and convey the message through implication and expression of allusion . a poem written in this form is very difficult for me. good job!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ethan

1 Year Ago

Thanks you!
short and sweet, made me smile.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ethan

1 Year Ago

Thanks again :)

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