Goodnight

Goodnight

A Poem by Ethan
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My first haiku...

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Stars have been turned off.

The night sky is cold and black.

God must be sleeping.


© 2017 Ethan



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nice haiku there ethan. since haiku is short, some may think it's pretty easy to compose, well i'm not sure about that...how you have to compress everything into a 17 syllable poem and convey the message through implication and expression of allusion . a poem written in this form is very difficult for me. good job!

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Ethan

3 Months Ago

Thanks you!



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very very nicely written thanks for sharing this wonderful piece.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Well done! I love how versatile you are with your writing! Love this piece! Tabby

Posted 3 Months Ago


Who will watch us at night?

Posted 3 Months Ago


I love it! Very good for your first Haiku.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ethan

3 Months Ago

Thanks Zeldablue
Short and simple but also elegant and fascinating!

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ethan

3 Months Ago

Thanks!!!!
Good job. Short and sweet, just how I like 'em.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ethan

3 Months Ago

Hahaha thanks
nice haiku there ethan. since haiku is short, some may think it's pretty easy to compose, well i'm not sure about that...how you have to compress everything into a 17 syllable poem and convey the message through implication and expression of allusion . a poem written in this form is very difficult for me. good job!

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ethan

3 Months Ago

Thanks you!
short and sweet, made me smile.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ethan

3 Months Ago

Thanks again :)
Good try, Ethan...Keep it up.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ethan

3 Months Ago

Thanks :))
The origins of haiku can be traced back as far as the 9th century. Haiku is more than a type of poem; it is a way of looking at the physical world and seeing something deeper, like the very nature of existence. And, for a first attempt - you nailed it ... well penned!

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ethan

3 Months Ago

Thank you Phil

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