Angels surrounding me

Angel of death

Come take my last breath

Angel of fire

Come drench my desire

Angel thats fallen

Please hear me callen

Angel of the night

Come darken my sight

Angel of the sun

Hold me no more, our deal is done

Angel of the day

Come take my pain away

Angel of broken parts

Please mend my broken heart.

 

Reviews

[fallen angel]

A nice piece well written and expressed

[Through the Gateway]

A short piece, but no loss of message here. Reaching out to all that can help you to take your pain away in all of its manifestations.

Very well done.

[Eagle Cruagh]

Another exquisite little poem by LeeAnn.
This is one writer who keeps a squadron of
Angels busy. Well, better to keep them '
busy than to leave them flapping around in
the clouds with nothing to do.

You please me, tickle me , amuse me and in
the process you are a great writer.

My rating -----100 %

------Eagle Cruagh