would you miss me...

would you miss me...

A Poem by ~LeeAnn~

If I were to die today

Without another word to say

Without a goodbye

But with a single tear in my eye

Would you miss me.....

If I were to die tonight

Without a future in sight

Without you by my side

But with you damage still inside

Would you miss me.....

If I were to die tomorrow

Without letting go of my sorrow

Without letting you know

But with simply just letting go

Would you miss me...

© 2009 ~LeeAnn~


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I believe you would be missed. I have known too many who left without a goodbye. Leave marks and scars on their friends and family. A powerful poem. A excellent question you left us with. A outstanding short poem.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago


kinda sad but this one is great =)

-Will

Posted 14 Years Ago


So sad yet beautiful...so simple yet deep...so dark yet colourful...
iI really liked this one...the way that you put the feelings, the simphony of the thoughts...

Great job...

Posted 14 Years Ago


A true lament. Often we lay at night thinking about loves past, recent or distant, and wondering about whether they are thinking of us.

A good piece. I like the repetition.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Wow! Very emotional write here
I can feel your sorrow.
Your words flowed so well too.


Posted 14 Years Ago



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~LeeAnn~
~LeeAnn~

The dark depths of my mind.



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