Music of Humanity

(C) 2010

Yearning for Heaven's song

I've been here for far too long

 

Trapped in a sad perplexity of

a slumber

Influence has brought me

under

 

Loneliness well over it's

course

My silence has made me

hoarse

 

Mute to the music of humanity

I'm now the base line of insanity

 

In my mind forms an assembly

Of countless plagues

lost of a remedy

 

Hearing words of evil tongues

Trembling,

I drink them up like a sponge

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Paradoxical]

another great write! "Mute to the music of humanity, I'm now the base line of insanity" are my fave lines. Fantastic flow

[M.Kilani]

great work on the images, flow and rhyme scheme ... yet the ending was a bit out of tune ... otherwise this piece is good