No Title But Its You !!

Dedication to my Partner

No Title But Its You !!

Innocent I am
But Purest is You..

Cute I am
But Cutest is You..

Twinkle I am
But Shine is You..

Living I am
But Breathing is You..

Pickle I am
But Honey is You..

Funny I am
But Craziest is You..

Real I am
But Honest is You..

Dull I am
But Bright is You..

Flower I am
But Fragrance is You..

Happy I am
But Reason is You..

&

Life I am
But World is You..

~AK~

© Eve Ola

Reviews

[Mirra]

Sweet :-) Unique and heartfelt cheesy love poem. Love the flow and the contradiction of the lines.

[Eve Ola]

Thanks Mirra ! your feedback is much appreciated :)

[Mirra]

Your welcome Eve :-)

[Coyote Poetry]

"Life I am
But World is You.."
Nice flow of thoughts leading to the very good ending. I wanted to know more. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Eve Ola]

Thank you Coyote, your words are encourging for me :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I live your poetry. I'm glad to see them on the request board.

[Michael G. Smith]

The ageless notion; defining yourself through someone else.

[Eve Ola]

thank you :)

[Jennie Baron]

What an eloquent testament to the one you love! I'm so glad I read this.

[Eve Ola]

and I am so glad you like it. Thanks for the words :)

[Aprille]

This is cute and sweet. Like it so much. :)

[Eve Ola]

Thank you "Popeyes the olive" :D

[Aprille]

Haha, you are most welcome. ;)

[anne]

wow ....a lovely read.......

[Eve Ola]

Thanks :)

[Matching Socks]

Very touching and warm poem, full of affection.
Lovely. :)

[Eve Ola]

Thank you Ance :)

[Itumeleng Molokomme]

this is a very beautiful write. good work

[Eve Ola]

Thank you :)