Do You Feel the Same - Love Questioning

Do You Feel the Same - Love Questioning

I wrote a lot about our love
More about our relation to one another,
I always believe this love and it's strength
Do you agree with the same?

You don't know about my all writings
You don't know about my sleepy talks
But still I believe that you are hearing from my heart
Is that true? Do you really feel this?

I am crazy in your love and 
You are my drug addiction,
I can't live without you, not a single breath
Do you feel the same? Am I your addiction too?

We fight too as other couples
We have arguments for the stupid things
But beside this fight, I love you no matter what
Do you have same feeling against our fights?

Many people stand against or in between
I always fight with our love
Because for me you are first, then me
Do I have the same place as you have?

I know the answers for what I asked
But still I want to know
Because for me what you said is Important
Is this feeling same for me too?

For me you are important most of all
I love you dearly and I always do
I will stand true against my words and I mean it
Do you really mean it too?

~AK~ 

© Eve Ola 

Reviews

[Penny]

Reminded me of Jagjit Singh Ji's ghazal "Teri Ummeed pe thukra raha hoon duniya ko, tujhe bhi apne yyeh aethbar hai ke nahin" . Being in love is good, but sometimes a reality check is neede and you have described that only in the poem. If I would've done this, things between me and my x would've been better *sigh* Anyway,beautiful piece, nice depicted. Good job.

[Ashira Macy]

I adore this. The set up is perfect. You pour your heart our in each stanza, and then ask a question as the last line to get confirmation that you are not alone in these feelings. Even when we know how someone feels, we still don't always feel confident, so it is always nice to hear it again. Great work, I think this is one of my favorites of yours. =)

[Steve L.]

Love should come with a Warning Label!! I enjoy what flows through your mind.

[KeeD]

I wonder the same when I feel this crazy little thing called love. Good poem!

[Eve Ola]

Thanks Keegan em glad you feel the same way :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the questions of love in the poem. People get jealous when two people have found happiness. I like the flow of thoughts leading to the strong ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Eve Ola]

Thanks for supporting my work :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Matching Socks]

Beautiful picture to accompany this.
Love has it's good, bad and ugly moments...

[Eve Ola]

Thanks Ana :)

[lee_jang]

this poem is more on the free style of writing a poem, the one that has no rhymes and no exact counting, am I right? i'm not that good in poems but I believe this poem contains a good idea but you have to polish the grammar and the adjective. Example, when you say "addicted drug", you can just say You are my drug, because it's automatic that drug is addicting. Hmm, that's my take. But you have a nice idea there, to keep asking the one that you love if he or she feels the same.

[Eve Ola]

Thanks Lee.. yeah its free writing style .. Thanks for the feedback