"Aging into Legend"

"Aging into Legend"

A Poem by Thepensiveplayer
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The older you grow, the more you have to show.

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"Its a wonderful experience when you age"
"because you break your mental cage"
"from what I can see"
"you've grown to be carefree"

"I find solace and inspiration in your growth"
"now I mus uphold my life-changing oath"
"The things that you've accomplished in life"
"Proved to me that people can move beyond strife"

"In your last days, don't worry"
"because I want to see you in a hurry"
"when your gone, I'll pass your story down"
"to ensure that your revered around the town"

© 2017 Thepensiveplayer


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I like this very much.

It was a thought provoking piece and I especially like it because all that you have to say is condensed into three stanzas of great structure. You seem a natural if you ask me :)



Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thepensiveplayer

6 Years Ago

thank you very much! I love writing like this often

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Thepensiveplayer
Thepensiveplayer

Harvey, LA



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My name is Corey Johnson and I enjoy writing poems to apply growth to myself. I've always wondered," what constitutes a good life in this world?" "Should a person conform to society's expectations or .. more..

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