"Do I choose her 3?"

"Do I choose her 3?"

A Poem by Thepensiveplayer
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Surprisingly, things went a way I didn't expect that day

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"My friend and I played pool this night"
"We wanted to relax our minds that were tight"
"He mentioned a beauty that was checking on me"
"and I asked, who was she?"

"He told me her name and her story thus far"
"and I could only wonder as I had a drink at the bar"
"I took a chance and made a move"
"just to see if she would disapprove"

"After I took a comfortable seat"
"she kept giving me a smile that was sweet"
"Within minutes, she jumped onto my lap"
"As I felt her body, I knew it was time"
"For me to end this wonderful rhyme"

© 2017 Thepensiveplayer


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I enjoyed this, I found it little comical as well.
Wonderful 3 part series.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

risks are worth taking for the right people, beatiful story in your words.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thepensiveplayer

6 Years Ago

Thank you. Your right about that and sometimes those risks end up being amazing in the long run. ;)

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Thepensiveplayer
Thepensiveplayer

Harvey, LA



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My name is Corey Johnson and I enjoy writing poems to apply growth to myself. I've always wondered," what constitutes a good life in this world?" "Should a person conform to society's expectations or .. more..

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