"Thanks for being who you are"

"Thanks for being who you are"

A Poem by Thepensiveplayer
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I'll keep you going even when you want to stop

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"Thanks for being who you are"

"To all folks that read and write"
"I pray that your future will be bright"
"As for me, I'm not going anywhere"
"because writing is my greatest care"

"Thanks for being who you are"

"If anyone casts you aside"
"you took them down with your great strides"
"You built up your willpower"
"and now you watch the fools cower"

"Thanks for being who you are"

"I enjoy your work and all you've achieved"
"but I see more in your life to be believed"
"let our paths be parallel and walk into the future"
"because I intend to make sure yours is super"

"Thanks for being who you are"

© 2017 Thepensiveplayer



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If anyone casts you aside"
"you took them down with your great strides"
"You built up your willpower"
"and now you watch the fools cower"

I must say WOW! to these lines here,
I love this part a lot.
amazing write you have here.

Posted 11 Months Ago


Hey this is so wonderful and so well written. You are very poetic.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Perseverance, encouragement, bonding words coming together so fluidly. Who can't help but feel good after reading your poem? Excellent!

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"To all folks that read and write"
"I pray that your future will be bright"
"As for me, I'm not going anywhere"
"because writing is my greatest care"

LOVED this part, this is so wonderful.
awesome rhyme scheme and flow.
Very talented.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Faith and hope resonate through every line.In the end, that's what we all need.
I see more in your life to be believed..

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

An uplifting and inspiring cheer for all humankind. Thank you for that! I love the call for independence, confidence, strength, and courage. Nice work.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i love this. Its so appreciative and forgiving. love love love

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on December 25, 2017
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Thepensiveplayer
Thepensiveplayer

Harvey, LA



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My name is Corey Johnson and I enjoy writing poems to apply growth to myself. I've always wondered," what constitutes a good life in this world?" "Should a person conform to society's expectations or .. more..

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