"Making you better"

"Making you better"

A Poem by Thepensiveplayer
"

Your too good of a person not to succeed

"
"Let me inside your heart"
"so your improvement can start"
"tell me your truth in your life"
"because I want to combat your strife"

"Don't think you have an impossible task"
"because I'll help you as long as you ask"
"If you feel incoming dread"
"Relax, because I'm here to help face what's ahead"

"Don't shy away from the tedious chores"
"because their a small part of your life's score"
"Lastly, understand your life and trials are worthwhile"
"because I don't want to lose your precious smile"

© 2018 Thepensiveplayer



My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

I agree with what Rob said it’s very sincere and beautiful

Posted 9 Months Ago


This is a gentle and sincere plea for a deep relationship, the type of bond achieved only when both individuals make themselves totally vulnerable to the other. Of course, it's a challenge, as you imply in your poem, because our inner fortress is our defense mechanism, our protection against emotional harm.

Another good piece of work, sir. I look forward to reading more of your work.

Posted 9 Months Ago


LOVED THAT LAST STANZA, this is very well written and expressed. I really enjoyed this write. Truthful as well

Posted 9 Months Ago



Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

75 Views
3 Reviews
Rating
Added on January 1, 2018
Last Updated on January 1, 2018

Author

Thepensiveplayer
Thepensiveplayer

Harvey, LA



About
My name is Corey Johnson and I enjoy writing poems to apply growth to myself. I've always wondered," what constitutes a good life in this world?" "Should a person conform to society's expectations or .. more..

Writing