"Making you better"

"Making you better"

A Poem by Thepensiveplayer

Your too good of a person not to succeed

"Let me inside your heart"
"so your improvement can start"
"tell me your truth in your life"
"because I want to combat your strife"

"Don't think you have an impossible task"
"because I'll help you as long as you ask"
"If you feel incoming dread"
"Relax, because I'm here to help face what's ahead"

"Don't shy away from the tedious chores"
"because their a small part of your life's score"
"Lastly, understand your life and trials are worthwhile"
"because I don't want to lose your precious smile"

© 2018 Thepensiveplayer

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I agree with what Rob said it’s very sincere and beautiful

Posted 1 Year Ago

This is a gentle and sincere plea for a deep relationship, the type of bond achieved only when both individuals make themselves totally vulnerable to the other. Of course, it's a challenge, as you imply in your poem, because our inner fortress is our defense mechanism, our protection against emotional harm.

Another good piece of work, sir. I look forward to reading more of your work.

Posted 1 Year Ago

LOVED THAT LAST STANZA, this is very well written and expressed. I really enjoyed this write. Truthful as well

Posted 1 Year Ago

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3 Reviews
Added on January 1, 2018
Last Updated on January 1, 2018



Harvey, LA

My name is Corey Johnson and I enjoy writing poems to apply growth to myself. I've always wondered," what constitutes a good life in this world?" "Should a person conform to society's expectations or .. more..