"Let me take your fight"

"Let me take your fight"

A Poem by Thepensiveplayer

Its who you are and what that means to me

I know what's ahead isn't what you planned
but together we can make a strong stand
I came to share your pain
because I want to keep you sane

Its pointless to bicker between us
because together we'll make a great plus
I'm helping you for who you are
while you stare at me like I'm bizarre

Understand that your my friend
and that's worthy of respect to defend

© 2018 Thepensiveplayer

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Sweet and strong written poem. I really loved the ending.

Posted 10 Months Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The ending is perfect. I really like the stanza change with the lines as well. It makes it smooth and flow very well :)

Posted 1 Year Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love the line " I came to share your pain" ....it's really a wonderful poem.

Posted 1 Year Ago

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3 Reviews
Added on January 3, 2018
Last Updated on January 3, 2018



Harvey, LA

My name is Corey Johnson and I enjoy writing poems to apply growth to myself. I've always wondered," what constitutes a good life in this world?" "Should a person conform to society's expectations or .. more..