For You.

The heart, the breath;
Invaded by an intoxicating soul.
Now, what? Just come to think of it:
What if this throbbing heart, reflecting the irresistible sensation like a fragile mirror, breaks apart?
What if this exhilarating breath, flying like a Pegasus, drops dead?
The sunshine days, the starlit nights;
Imprisoned by an intoxicating soul.
It is you. You.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Bala Gorthi]

Amazing write!
I feel this feel rises the moment we are intoxicated by something intense.
I myself went through this feel for certain things(things mean people as well as strong emotions we feel for others) that at sometime meant a lot to me. I would get scared at the very thought of it. But, believe me, we do survive and come stronger or sometimes come out like strangers.
Very, very beautifully presented. Excellent.
Take a bow for this, Fahmida! Keep writing.:-):-)

[Fahmida Mehreen]

I am much obliged for your sweetly put constructive review and for sharing your valuable insights. Thanks a lot for taking out your time to read and and drop a review. :)

[Polly]

This is so deep, I can't get enough of this poem. From what I've learnt from life so far, I can just say that we just have to keep moving on, and not dwell over the sad, heartbreaking things. This was beautiful. Great job writing this, Fahmida. :)

[Fahmida Mehreen]

Thanks a lot, Polly! :)

[Polly]

No problem!

[Manu]

One of my friend once told me that the number of scars on your heart is what makes you a real fighter. You should keep moving on. Love is surely the most addictive emotion in life. Whether it is for good or bad only time can tell.
Even though this feeling of being heartbroken is painful but it is equally precious because in some cases love never dies it just gets lost.
Very well written :)
And as you said life goes on :-)

[Fahmida Mehreen]

Thank you for sharing your thoughts. There is no denial to what your friend said.
Indeed, time never stops and life goes on till our last. :)

[Paul Bell]

Always think you're given life to explore life itself. You gotta get out there and test yourself.

[Fahmida Mehreen]

Can't agree more. Thank you for the review. :)

[Alice Poésy]

Trusting our hearts in the hands of another, is one of the bravest things we can ever do as humans. Sometimes the ones our hearts beat for, are the ones that break that same heart. Nevertheless, we take the risk.

Lovely words.

[Fahmida Mehreen]

We take the risk only to discover what it can give us in return. Either it will be an eternal gain or an irrecoverable loss. But, you just can't stop risking it. There is no room for playing safe when the heart is fully consumed.

[Alice Poésy]

Well said.

[Gray]

The one that raises our pulse is one that effects us without speaking a word. It is this one that holds value and power within us as well as love.

[Fahmida Mehreen]

It is the ones silence whose is the loudest.

Thank you for the review.

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I can relate to this poem, Fahmida.

We find that special someone who makes the hair on our arms stand up, the heart in our chest beats out their name and the smell of their scent sends us on a flurry of delirious happiness. I know the feeling. I also know the emptiness that comes when that person departs, taking away everything you needed in your life. Embrace your emotions. Protect your heart as well. For it breaks very, very easily.
A heartfelt poem, a lovely dedication to a beloved one.

[Fahmida Mehreen]

We all have that one love in our lives that we simply cannot get over or let go of. Love, as it demands to be felt.

Thank you for reviewing it.

[Usman Muhammad]

Amazing choice of words. Very deep and beautiful poem.
Well done
Thanks for sharing such beautiful poem.

[Fahmida Mehreen]

Happy to get appreciated.
Keep reading! :)

[Country boy183798]

Mesmerizing and beautiful. It's deep, and your words are as sincere as they can get. Very well done, thank you for sharing it, and keep on writing.

[Fahmida Mehreen]

Much thanks for your encouragement. Stay posted. :)

[Shabeeh Haider]

very deep and eloquent. " Imprisoned by an intoxicating soul"

[Fahmida Mehreen]

Thank you, Haider. The appreciation means a lot.